9/9/2004 c1 97Torturd Artist
Work, paintball and the mall..wow..sounds just like the summer I wish I was having, lol...I want to apologize about the 'no contact info', I didn't realize that I hadn't put any in, if you look now I've changed it :) Thank you for the review and I'm sorry that it took so long for me to get back to you, I've been so busy and haven't had much of a chance to check reviews...Though that's in the past and as for the presant I'm very eager to read Desolate Soul...
Dang, all I can say is 'wow'...That poem was truly amazing...I always pick a favorite part or line of a poem, but for this one I can't, there are simply too many pieces of it that I love - If I had to pick one I'd pick the entire thing! It's beautiful. I love that it's suicide, though you didn't put in blood or how they killed themselves, just that he did...I haven't read any suicide poems like that before though I've writen quite a few myself...It was quite longas well and I loved that...Some people can't write long poems because they stretch it and it sounds as if it should have ended sooner, though this one was just perfect, it ended just where it needed to and I love how you ended it...That was beautiful, simply beautiful...A deffinate favorite, excellent job, keep up the good work
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