for Pour Down Rain2/7/2005 c1 GoBsNgObsOfGlUe
RAin RAin go away! Come again another day! UH huh, whatever, not with this poem. This one ROCKS THE BLOCK! I love rain, i like to dance in the rain! ha ha!
RAin RAin go away! Come again another day! UH huh, whatever, not with this poem. This one ROCKS THE BLOCK! I love rain, i like to dance in the rain! ha ha!
1/31/2005 c1 
57Tutube
. . . i like colorses ^.^ Rain! Rain! *prances around singing: "i'm dancing in the rain!"*
57Tutube. . . i like colorses ^.^ Rain! Rain! *prances around singing: "i'm dancing in the rain!"*
8/31/2004 c1 4jemraja
beautiful! i can picture thousands of people standing on parched earth in a magnificent choir singing this! *wipes away tear* its like an old indigenous song, swaying and down-to-earth... sorry if this isnt making sense
heh "scarce of the vitamins of life" brings to mind those brown icecreamswhere they have colourful gummi-worms buried inside, and you have to dig them up - except this is just plain chocolate icecream without any vitamins...
especially love this line "Drench these grey souls with your flood of color"
beautiful imagery... keep writing!
4jemrajabeautiful! i can picture thousands of people standing on parched earth in a magnificent choir singing this! *wipes away tear* its like an old indigenous song, swaying and down-to-earth... sorry if this isnt making sense
heh "scarce of the vitamins of life" brings to mind those brown icecreamswhere they have colourful gummi-worms buried inside, and you have to dig them up - except this is just plain chocolate icecream without any vitamins...
especially love this line "Drench these grey souls with your flood of color"
beautiful imagery... keep writing!
8/29/2004 c1 SNK
Hey! I had no idea you wrote poems! Wow you're pretty good. Wish I could write poems... Oh well. But really I like it!
Hey! I had no idea you wrote poems! Wow you're pretty good. Wish I could write poems... Oh well. But really I like it!