for Your hand in mine10/29/2008 c1 
173Little girl Big world
i really like this...it flowed nicely and i love the rhyming. its very real and sweet. keep writing!
173Little girl Big worldi really like this...it flowed nicely and i love the rhyming. its very real and sweet. keep writing!
1/4/2008 c1 6Rimma
I just wanted to let you know that one of your stanzas apparently has some open tags hanging onto it. You might want to reupload and fix that.
This is very touching to me, personally. I think it's beautiful just for the content.
6RimmaI just wanted to let you know that one of your stanzas apparently has some open tags hanging onto it. You might want to reupload and fix that.
This is very touching to me, personally. I think it's beautiful just for the content.
9/16/2007 c1 4abyssmal
this poem is beautiful.
i understand it, and i can feel the emotion behind it.
4abyssmalthis poem is beautiful.
i understand it, and i can feel the emotion behind it.
3/11/2006 c1 4ShadowedNightmare
I loved this poem and the rhyming scheme is wonderful.
Keep up the good work!
4ShadowedNightmareI loved this poem and the rhyming scheme is wonderful.
Keep up the good work!
2/27/2005 c1 Story-Teller's Aide
That's great, love it. maybe add 'just' in the last sentence after and we...I think the last sentence just slightly hindered the flow, overall a fantastic poem!
That's great, love it. maybe add 'just' in the last sentence after and we...I think the last sentence just slightly hindered the flow, overall a fantastic poem!
9/4/2004 c1 inactiveaccountz
Awesome poem! I really wish all the freakin' homophobes out there would just get a life and accept that people can love whoever they want. Anyhow, I'll get goin before I start ranting...good poem once more ^^
Awesome poem! I really wish all the freakin' homophobes out there would just get a life and accept that people can love whoever they want. Anyhow, I'll get goin before I start ranting...good poem once more ^^
8/17/2004 c1 Cheyenne
I really like the rhyming structure in this one. The message is something I admire about you.
I really like the rhyming structure in this one. The message is something I admire about you.
8/17/2004 c1 32Chalice And Vail
That was amazing... it makes me wonder who your love is... it was really good... well done...
32Chalice And VailThat was amazing... it makes me wonder who your love is... it was really good... well done...
8/16/2004 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Wow! I really applaud that you wrote and posted this. There is so much hatred and misunderstanding out their about homosexuals. I have so many friends who are gay, and I think that they are happier now that they have come out. This is a really good piece of work, and I love that you posted it. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietWow! I really applaud that you wrote and posted this. There is so much hatred and misunderstanding out their about homosexuals. I have so many friends who are gay, and I think that they are happier now that they have come out. This is a really good piece of work, and I love that you posted it. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.