for Violins and Roses5/15/2005 c1 
31Living in a story called life
great job i liked this poem im a violinist myself so it really interested me! keep up the writing and thanks for the review!... ^^
31Living in a story called lifegreat job i liked this poem im a violinist myself so it really interested me! keep up the writing and thanks for the review!... ^^
1/4/2005 c1 20Once in a blue moon
nice, kid, nice. ^_^
"Pouring out poem after poem/ about violins and roses." Love it.
The meter is a little off center, though, I think.
20Once in a blue moonnice, kid, nice. ^_^
"Pouring out poem after poem/ about violins and roses." Love it.
The meter is a little off center, though, I think.
11/28/2004 c1 112Kazuline
Inspiration is not a curse,Nor is it a drug.My muse is not forcingThese thoughts on me,But rather inspiring them.
I really like those lines. Awesome poem.
112KazulineInspiration is not a curse,Nor is it a drug.My muse is not forcingThese thoughts on me,But rather inspiring them.
I really like those lines. Awesome poem.
8/18/2004 c1 6Chyriyu
What is wrong about writing about violins and roses? I like them. If you want to write about them, write. I do the same thing. I have umteen poems about Phoenix, lol. Nice poem, by the way. The power of Freedom of Speech. Keep writing!
6ChyriyuWhat is wrong about writing about violins and roses? I like them. If you want to write about them, write. I do the same thing. I have umteen poems about Phoenix, lol. Nice poem, by the way. The power of Freedom of Speech. Keep writing!
8/17/2004 c1 12Terra Tigra
Power to the freedom of speech! Woo! You write about those violins and roses!
Hehehe.
I liked this, very nice job. There isn't a whole lot of images in it, though. I think you really have something here but I'm not getting a lot out of it. Maybe try adding a little color and/or image? Just suggestions.
Awesome job, I like the idea. Nice to know that inspiration can come from any number of places, even reviews.
Arrivederci!
-Terra-
12Terra TigraPower to the freedom of speech! Woo! You write about those violins and roses!
Hehehe.
I liked this, very nice job. There isn't a whole lot of images in it, though. I think you really have something here but I'm not getting a lot out of it. Maybe try adding a little color and/or image? Just suggestions.
Awesome job, I like the idea. Nice to know that inspiration can come from any number of places, even reviews.
Arrivederci!
-Terra-
8/17/2004 c1 Incrys
::reads last four lines, smiles:: That's the great thing about freedom of press...(I personally like your violin and rose poems)
::reads last four lines, smiles:: That's the great thing about freedom of press...(I personally like your violin and rose poems)
8/17/2004 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Oh my god I love this, as a writer I know exactaly how you feel, I'm right on board with this. This is probibly one of the best things that I've red on this site. I love it, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietOh my god I love this, as a writer I know exactaly how you feel, I'm right on board with this. This is probibly one of the best things that I've red on this site. I love it, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.