
12/2/2005 c1 SEP
Great poem. It's has some nice insight on those who are transgendered. It's realy good to see a poem about someone like that, that doesn't make them out to be monsters.
-SEP
Great poem. It's has some nice insight on those who are transgendered. It's realy good to see a poem about someone like that, that doesn't make them out to be monsters.
-SEP
3/25/2005 c1
79Dartxni
I like this. It's got a simple rhyme sceme that works.
As well, it reflects me, or not me exactly but someone like me.

I like this. It's got a simple rhyme sceme that works.
As well, it reflects me, or not me exactly but someone like me.
12/25/2004 c1
26Siriusly James
I LOVE this poem! It's incredibly well written, and it describes me just right - I especially love the last four lines.

I LOVE this poem! It's incredibly well written, and it describes me just right - I especially love the last four lines.
8/17/2004 c1 Cheyenne
Amazing poem. It's not really easy to describe those kinds of feelings right, but yours does, very well. Did he see it yet? He's going to LOVE it.
Amazing poem. It's not really easy to describe those kinds of feelings right, but yours does, very well. Did he see it yet? He's going to LOVE it.
8/17/2004 c1
83Nails For Your Crucifix
Very interesting. You've got very nice descriptions/emotions in this and I will definately need to read more of your work in the future. Nice job.

Very interesting. You've got very nice descriptions/emotions in this and I will definately need to read more of your work in the future. Nice job.
8/17/2004 c1
118Yaquel Visain
This had a lot of feeling put into it, and those feelings really shine through. I enjoyed reading this.

This had a lot of feeling put into it, and those feelings really shine through. I enjoyed reading this.
8/17/2004 c1
49ADreamer'sCurse
Oh wow... I don't even know what to say but that was one fantastic poem. Please do continue your writings!
~A Dreamer's Curse

Oh wow... I don't even know what to say but that was one fantastic poem. Please do continue your writings!
~A Dreamer's Curse