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3/30/2005 c1 80citrus scented
great mesh of descriptions, and images so vivid and clear. A very strong, powerful poem- some of the descriptions are just incredible.
1/21/2005 c1 177Chaotic Charisma
From what I've seen, you do an excellent job of capturing emotions that don't have a name in the first place. "You leave your ashes behind"? Awesome imagry here. The ending is very depressing.
12/21/2004 c1 erasedcrap
Good. I like the tone. Powerful.
9/8/2004 c1 3Powerof1P3PadfootsGrl
omg! this is written so well! powerful...
8/18/2004 c1 10marie alexandria
i love this poem so much..it's amazing, amazing work. so angsty and emotional. amazing...
8/17/2004 c1 kdatlyno
Sounds familiar... you imagine all the things you want to do, but can never carry them out.
I don't know if it's an opportunity lost though - sometimes the imagining of it is enough...

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