for Among my Wild Flowers2/2/2005 c1 
15BecomingMyself
Very sweet thought to create one's own world to get through reality...
Nice work, keep it up!
15BecomingMyselfVery sweet thought to create one's own world to get through reality...
Nice work, keep it up!
11/29/2004 c1 20Once in a blue moon
...ah! in. spi. ered! I must go draw it!
nice imagry (obviously, if I now want to go draw it, but still, it must be mentioned)
On the by and by, you reviewed something called "Music" about an eternity ago. The 'other half', as you could call it, of Once wrote it. She only spiffs around once in awhile, and I think you might (maybe. possibly. there is a slight chance.) have seen the difference in our styles. so that's that.
good job!
20Once in a blue moon...ah! in. spi. ered! I must go draw it!
nice imagry (obviously, if I now want to go draw it, but still, it must be mentioned)
On the by and by, you reviewed something called "Music" about an eternity ago. The 'other half', as you could call it, of Once wrote it. She only spiffs around once in awhile, and I think you might (maybe. possibly. there is a slight chance.) have seen the difference in our styles. so that's that.
good job!
8/21/2004 c1 Incrys
Wow, I'm used to violin references when reading your work, but the piano worked here. I liked the imagery of walking through the wildflowers bare-foot.
Wow, I'm used to violin references when reading your work, but the piano worked here. I liked the imagery of walking through the wildflowers bare-foot.
8/20/2004 c1 36obsidian katana
great piece. nice metaphors, deep message you have here, nicely conveyed through this poem. i like this a lot. awesome work!
36obsidian katanagreat piece. nice metaphors, deep message you have here, nicely conveyed through this poem. i like this a lot. awesome work!