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10/13/2005 c1 23Nothing Profound
I want to cry. Lovely job.
7/12/2005 c1 14Strange.Synchronicity
Wow...as this one is in my native language, it's a bit more powerful to me. I understood Le plus fort l'emporte, le plus faible creve, but having to think so much about how to properly translate it kinda kills a lot of the emotion. This was incredible though, I thought I was gonna cry at the end. Great job, I was going to review A Change In Perspective tonight, but I got sidetracked writing and I took too long to start reading, so it'll have to wait 'til the morning. Bon nuit, I promise I'll review the other in the morning.
3/12/2005 c1 Widom
Oh my god...what a beautiful story, so tragic and romantic *sigh*. I like it, very much.
1/27/2005 c1 12Saharian
Awesome! I feel bad that I haven't reviewed anything of yours before, especially because you always review mine! :-( So here I am, checking out your work. I love your profile by the way, LONG LIVE CANADA! The thing I hate the most is when I had a guy from Hawaii ask me if I owned more than one pair of snowshoes to attach to my dog sled... I almost burst a blood vessel... anyway nevermind that. I love this one shot. I totally understood what you meant in your AN when you said you don't really know why you wrote this, it just kind of poured out. That happens to me quite often. I just wrote one in fact and I was pondering posting it... maybe I should... oh well. Yes I love the way you word everything, it's a story but it's a very poetic one and those are my favourites. I love the rain too. My favourite line in the entire thing is "It was raining. It seemed appropriate to me somehow. In situations like this, the sun had no right to be." But I'm not really sure if that last line works... it might sound a bit better if it was phrased, "In situations like this, the usn had no right to be shining." But I don't now... they both look good. Anyway I love it, it's very sad, and that's always my favourite genre... :-) Saharian
12/3/2004 c1 Oneirocritik
That's just a little bit scary. I liked it:)-Oneirocritik
8/18/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
That was a very nice (but sad!) short story. I hope you update Perspectives soon!

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