for Fear in the Eyes6/1/2005 c1 
3Pont
hehe, I just realized that my author alert got turned off somehow. No wonder it was so quiet in my mailbox! (Except for the plague that is spam, of course)
This is great too, different from your other ones... but great! Very stand-offish, I can just see them eyeing each other from the shadows. *shivers* kinda creepy. I likes!
namárië!~Tolevalin
3Ponthehe, I just realized that my author alert got turned off somehow. No wonder it was so quiet in my mailbox! (Except for the plague that is spam, of course)
This is great too, different from your other ones... but great! Very stand-offish, I can just see them eyeing each other from the shadows. *shivers* kinda creepy. I likes!
namárië!~Tolevalin
8/21/2004 c1 194Aslan Israel
Wouldn't it be interesting to know everyone's thought and feeling? But then again, would you really want to know what some people think about you? anyway, great poem.
194Aslan IsraelWouldn't it be interesting to know everyone's thought and feeling? But then again, would you really want to know what some people think about you? anyway, great poem.
8/18/2004 c1 16TwyliteRose
i liked it, especially the fact that this poem was much different than any of the others I've read recently! I like the contrast between the two people, and the differences and simalarities between their thoughts lol. *over analyzing* anywayz...good job!
oh, and BTW, could u R&R sum of my stuff 2? preferably the one called "jaded" but any is fine. thanx!
16TwyliteRosei liked it, especially the fact that this poem was much different than any of the others I've read recently! I like the contrast between the two people, and the differences and simalarities between their thoughts lol. *over analyzing* anywayz...good job!
oh, and BTW, could u R&R sum of my stuff 2? preferably the one called "jaded" but any is fine. thanx!