for Running9/27/2004 c1 
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Very good. I enjoyed this, and was surprised with the ending. I figured she was running from someone who was chasing her... I enjoyed it. Good writing, good feeling, good point. Especially love the last line. It was powerful.
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23vintage fadeVery good. I enjoyed this, and was surprised with the ending. I figured she was running from someone who was chasing her... I enjoyed it. Good writing, good feeling, good point. Especially love the last line. It was powerful.
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8/18/2004 c1 4bfmusashi
wow, you live in zealand? thats really cool, at least to me, cuz i always wanted to go there. :)
anyway this is pretty impressive, even though its short. you create a good, paranoia-ish kind of atmosphere with only a few paragraphs...and ur last sentence for the whole thing sums it all up perfectly. nice.
4bfmusashiwow, you live in zealand? thats really cool, at least to me, cuz i always wanted to go there. :)
anyway this is pretty impressive, even though its short. you create a good, paranoia-ish kind of atmosphere with only a few paragraphs...and ur last sentence for the whole thing sums it all up perfectly. nice.