for Crystals5/17/2005 c1 
7meep2creep
Beautiful, creative and breath-taking. Meeply likes. Happy day. Meep.
Meeply is a winner.
7meep2creepBeautiful, creative and breath-taking. Meeply likes. Happy day. Meep.
Meeply is a winner.
10/6/2004 c1 20Once in a blue moon
Only sappy if you try to make it into a metaphore for life *gags*. SO english class-y.
Anyway, I quite enjoyed it! I don't really think it was sappy at all. I felt like a rhyme was right around the corner the whole time and...well, there wasn't, but I did like the repetition of the words.
God, I haven't been on here in forever! *runs off to write something*
20Once in a blue moonOnly sappy if you try to make it into a metaphore for life *gags*. SO english class-y.
Anyway, I quite enjoyed it! I don't really think it was sappy at all. I felt like a rhyme was right around the corner the whole time and...well, there wasn't, but I did like the repetition of the words.
God, I haven't been on here in forever! *runs off to write something*
8/22/2004 c1 12Terra Tigra
Very cool. I could see what you were describing very clearly. I like it ^.^ But is was sad, I wanna know why he's so sad! Ep!
Well, I think you did very well with this. Phoenix...hehe...so cool!
Arrivederci!
-Terra-
12Terra TigraVery cool. I could see what you were describing very clearly. I like it ^.^ But is was sad, I wanna know why he's so sad! Ep!
Well, I think you did very well with this. Phoenix...hehe...so cool!
Arrivederci!
-Terra-
8/21/2004 c1 Incrys
Almost sounded like a friend advising a heart-broken friend with the recurring (sp?) "Dear Phoenix". Nice piece.
Almost sounded like a friend advising a heart-broken friend with the recurring (sp?) "Dear Phoenix". Nice piece.
8/20/2004 c1 36obsidian katana
great poem! well written, i love the imagery you use here, paints beautiful pictures in my mind. nice capitalization also, i think it really enhances the piece. great job!
36obsidian katanagreat poem! well written, i love the imagery you use here, paints beautiful pictures in my mind. nice capitalization also, i think it really enhances the piece. great job!