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8/21/2004 c1 5kazfuego
This was so lyrical. I loved it! Especially the line, 'Always on her wayside/The smell of death and decay.'
Powerful, yeah. Hey, if you've the time, check out my poem too!
luv ya!
-kaz
8/19/2004 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
Very nice! You keep a good flow going, and keep the interest up at the same time. I liked the first four lines best, and I liked the use of the word 'quite' - it reminded me of these old, snobby writings, which this poem is not. I don't know if I made sense, but anyway, very good poem you've got here.

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