6/26/2005 c1 Faithiny
Oh wow that's an awesome rhythm. Leaves you stunned and you just have to read it again. I love it how the review screen lets you read it again too. EXCELLENT! =P Please keep writing.
Oh wow that's an awesome rhythm. Leaves you stunned and you just have to read it again. I love it how the review screen lets you read it again too. EXCELLENT! =P Please keep writing.
8/23/2004 c1 3topaz07
This poem directly applies to me. My best guy friend Cody was like that. He leaves for war in december. It hurts. This helped me ^_^
This poem directly applies to me. My best guy friend Cody was like that. He leaves for war in december. It hurts. This helped me ^_^
8/19/2004 c1 42Jackie Hina
The line, "And then you walk in and say your leaving me All alone." should be two lines. Great job.
The line, "And then you walk in and say your leaving me All alone." should be two lines. Great job.