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9/24/2004 c1 22The Broken Hearted
laura that was realli good. u should write more poems. luv u lots
shannon
8/25/2004 c1 kritaya
I don't usually read poetry, but this was really good!
8/19/2004 c1 5eyesrdiolies
Wow, I really liked this and it was inspired by one of my favorite mangas as well. Very good and keep on writing :)
8/19/2004 c1 234The Moribund Marionette
Great. You can write poetry, too, so don't seclude all of your talent within your stories.
Sentence I would fix: "I really wish to kill you, rather then my other wish."
Sentence I loved the most: "You tear down my defense and build up my disease."
Great job.
R/R some of my stuff if you wish. :)
~Writer of Darkness~

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