for Crisscrossing Staffs4/21/2006 c1 
18bahaghari
Loved the jumbling of letters in line 4, i can visualize how everything's so mixed up-animates the emotions portrayed here.
18bahaghariLoved the jumbling of letters in line 4, i can visualize how everything's so mixed up-animates the emotions portrayed here.
2/5/2005 c1 88breakme
Im adding you to my favorites... k? This rocks. As for the first commenter... the line 'mnixig iton oen aonrteh' was obviously scrambled on purpose. And its brilliant.
88breakmeIm adding you to my favorites... k? This rocks. As for the first commenter... the line 'mnixig iton oen aonrteh' was obviously scrambled on purpose. And its brilliant.
1/28/2005 c1 35Infinity Plus One
Wonderful rhyming; honestly, this poem works wonders!"makingthingsruntogethermnixig iton oen aonrteh"Wonderful! This is going on my Favourite Stories list.
By the way,"Number of stories archived: 218 Highest review count for one story: 214 (Gay Is Okay!) Lowest review count for one story: 1 (Various pieces) Total number of reviews: 2600 (ish...I don't really feel like counting). Reviews submitted: 15 signed, probably about 150 more unsigned. Number of people who have me on their Favorite Authors list: 171"HOLY SHIT.
35Infinity Plus OneWonderful rhyming; honestly, this poem works wonders!"makingthingsruntogethermnixig iton oen aonrteh"Wonderful! This is going on my Favourite Stories list.
By the way,"Number of stories archived: 218 Highest review count for one story: 214 (Gay Is Okay!) Lowest review count for one story: 1 (Various pieces) Total number of reviews: 2600 (ish...I don't really feel like counting). Reviews submitted: 15 signed, probably about 150 more unsigned. Number of people who have me on their Favorite Authors list: 171"HOLY SHIT.
1/18/2005 c1 25pleasecometrue
makingthingsruntogether
That's awesome. I really like this one, great write ;)
25pleasecometruemakingthingsruntogether
That's awesome. I really like this one, great write ;)
10/8/2004 c1 nl1
about my essay. I'm a nintendo fan too. But still you might be right about your review. Sorry. I am a video game fan. I just thought the reason I was doing bad in school because it was video games. Anyway good, poem.
about my essay. I'm a nintendo fan too. But still you might be right about your review. Sorry. I am a video game fan. I just thought the reason I was doing bad in school because it was video games. Anyway good, poem.
8/20/2004 c1 51Helgmelia
I liked your creative touches to the "run together" and "mixing into" lines. They work both visually and conceptually. They're definitely the highlight of the poem for me.
51HelgmeliaI liked your creative touches to the "run together" and "mixing into" lines. They work both visually and conceptually. They're definitely the highlight of the poem for me.
8/20/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
I like it.. especially the sesond, third and fourth line.. very cool poem!
612simpleplan13I like it.. especially the sesond, third and fourth line.. very cool poem!
8/20/2004 c1 lilyqueen777
this line has a mistake: "mnixig iton oen aonrteh" i think it's supose to be this "mixing it on one another." please fix it. other than that I like the poem! and I like how the third line is all together like one whole word.
this line has a mistake: "mnixig iton oen aonrteh" i think it's supose to be this "mixing it on one another." please fix it. other than that I like the poem! and I like how the third line is all together like one whole word.