8/20/2004 c1 19ATTITUDE01
will you please write more cuz i LOVE this story i think the way you described chris,devon,and aiden they're all hot and i wanna see if devon asks that mystery girl out(i think i know who it is hehe) g2g bye ttyl

8/20/2004 c1 babez19
Fantastic story. Devon is just so sweet... Update soon!

8/20/2004 c1 Faile1
Awesome story! I really like it, though itd be cool to have more descriptions of the characters for a mental image. I really like the rivalry going on between the footballers and the soccer players. I'm all for soccer, personally, so I love it even more. Update soon!