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1/11/2007 c1 1Ajariel the Bloody
Maggot is, I find, a lovely way to describe someone. I find people generally dislike being referred to as "maggot".

Hope I don't bother you with all these reviews... you're just the only Satanist I've found here, so I think I'll stick to you for a while, in a saprophyte kind of manner. Sorry, i just really wanted to use the word "saprophyte", because I like it. So there, done, I used it.

Anywho, you don't even appear to have been posting much for the past, what, two years?

Anyhow, your stuff is good, you should continue.

Bloody yours,

-Ajariel the Bloody (Ah, the joys of the "commie t-shirt effect")HS!
1/15/2005 c1 2conservative121
i would swear you don't like me. every review i have in the essay section has been followed up by i review of yours attacking me in one form or another. If you don't like what i have to say now wait till you see what i've got coked up after the gay marriage essay.

oh and i don't reaay like this poem. nothing personal but i can't help not liking something. look in political poems for more of my reviews.
11/25/2004 c1 Twaberry
Very vague, but I like your use of insinuation instead of just saying everything plain out. Actually makes people think (which they don't seem to be doing much recently), though I have to say, you might want to clarify a tad. The sort of confusing, short piece thing is a really good idea, but it doesn't work if you don't get the point across. People don't analyze much, but there isn't much to analyze, you know? Still, really nice job, and I like the style. Very original ^-^
11/24/2004 c1 194Aslan Israel
Not sure I really understand this, because there was a lot more to Jesus than just being perfect. And even though he was perfect, show me where in the Bible it said he was popular?
11/7/2004 c1 90poetic abortion
@_@ I think I understand it...CBTD is rather tired...Must go to sleep...*falls a sleep* Z-;;
~ Noelle ~
9/9/2004 c1 34RavenDove
Huh? I don't get it, and yet somehow I think I know who you're talking about.
It must be the sleep deperbation I'm going through.
8/28/2004 c1 49greenbanana
Wow. Blunt. But good. I haven't ever seen any writing like this before. Very cool.
8/22/2004 c1 57logical-unreason
How the hell can anyone be a satanist it's beyond me. Why worship something that rewards you with damnation.
Crazy.

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