
8/23/2004 c3 Nicole
LOVE IT, keep it up!
LOVE IT, keep it up!
8/23/2004 c3 fire-fem
Nice chapter. I can feel this story heating up! Very good! Please keep it up and update soon!
Nice chapter. I can feel this story heating up! Very good! Please keep it up and update soon!
8/21/2004 c2 Nicole
LOVE IT! lol, keep it up!
LOVE IT! lol, keep it up!
8/21/2004 c1 wheey
Interesting beginning. Question though: how can the child look like Nathaniel if it was his STEP-sister's child? Otherwise, keep on writing!
Interesting beginning. Question though: how can the child look like Nathaniel if it was his STEP-sister's child? Otherwise, keep on writing!