for Love and War4/26/2006 c1 
82Isabella22
I love it! Good job!
And don't forget to update your story on fanfiction!
-Betsy
82Isabella22I love it! Good job!
And don't forget to update your story on fanfiction!
-Betsy
6/29/2005 c1 1hobowu
update update update update...sorri not this poem lol, i mean all ur other stories XD
1hobowuupdate update update update...sorri not this poem lol, i mean all ur other stories XD
12/18/2004 c1 49SleepDontWeep
WOAH... talk about deep and meaningful! jesus girl ur an amazing poet.ur words are so intricatly used and even though the poem is sad... i love it!i like tha ways u repeat 'Silence as i wipe away my tears...'it really just adds the meaning the reader has to figure out at the end.anyways well done!ur amazing!o and please r and r my stories 'she cant stop shakin and i cant stop touchin her' and/or 'Truly madly deeply'.they're both romance and mean a hell of alot to me!hope to hear from u soon! mwah! xx
49SleepDontWeepWOAH... talk about deep and meaningful! jesus girl ur an amazing poet.ur words are so intricatly used and even though the poem is sad... i love it!i like tha ways u repeat 'Silence as i wipe away my tears...'it really just adds the meaning the reader has to figure out at the end.anyways well done!ur amazing!o and please r and r my stories 'she cant stop shakin and i cant stop touchin her' and/or 'Truly madly deeply'.they're both romance and mean a hell of alot to me!hope to hear from u soon! mwah! xx
12/17/2004 c1 the onli one and me is jeebus
yeah, is this ur across the barricades poem?
yeah, is this ur across the barricades poem?
12/3/2004 c1 moi
omg, im seriosly angered and annoyed by that idiot. in fact, if i swore it would be more than that, at least 10 tiems worse. repost the whole story. seriously. oh and to the idiot: u r such a vile pice of scum that deserves to rot away in the fiery hells of whatever this planet has that is as bad as it can EVER get.
omg, im seriosly angered and annoyed by that idiot. in fact, if i swore it would be more than that, at least 10 tiems worse. repost the whole story. seriously. oh and to the idiot: u r such a vile pice of scum that deserves to rot away in the fiery hells of whatever this planet has that is as bad as it can EVER get.
11/23/2004 c1 i need a name
hey, give me a name and update...TO THE WORLD:LONIES B'dAY is TODAY!
smelly lonie,growing oldie,happy birthdee,lotsa huggee
hey, give me a name and update...TO THE WORLD:LONIES B'dAY is TODAY!
smelly lonie,growing oldie,happy birthdee,lotsa huggee
11/23/2004 c1 i need a name
hey, give me a name and update...TO THE WORLD:LONIES B'dAY is TODAY!
smelly lonie,growing oldie,happy birthdee,lotsa huggee
hey, give me a name and update...TO THE WORLD:LONIES B'dAY is TODAY!
smelly lonie,growing oldie,happy birthdee,lotsa huggee
11/19/2004 c1 unsufferable annoyance
hi again... im gonna review this evritime i come online so that you can reach 100 at least, that would be great!
hi again... im gonna review this evritime i come online so that you can reach 100 at least, that would be great!
11/17/2004 c1 poke
hello, this is moi's new name coz da other may be causing truble on fp (repeats) anyway, heres ur no 50!
Yay!
Poem:
Lonie's poem's very good,
Write another you really should.
As your talent needs to grow,
And your practice will let it show.
.
Talent only comes to a few,
But many more than you ever knew.
however though, yours is so great,
And its all yours on a silver plate.
.
I must go, but before i do,
Congratulations on 50 too.
That word means more than youll ever know,
Please, try hard, your talent will show.
.
.
Well, special mention of Jeebus, obviously, as she aint here, so yeah... 50! thats GREAT!
well, yeah, dedicated to u, duh, but thanks to jeebus!
hello, this is moi's new name coz da other may be causing truble on fp (repeats) anyway, heres ur no 50!
Yay!
Poem:
Lonie's poem's very good,
Write another you really should.
As your talent needs to grow,
And your practice will let it show.
.
Talent only comes to a few,
But many more than you ever knew.
however though, yours is so great,
And its all yours on a silver plate.
.
I must go, but before i do,
Congratulations on 50 too.
That word means more than youll ever know,
Please, try hard, your talent will show.
.
.
Well, special mention of Jeebus, obviously, as she aint here, so yeah... 50! thats GREAT!
well, yeah, dedicated to u, duh, but thanks to jeebus!
11/17/2004 c1 el
1 more, ne1 takes it u delete
1 more, ne1 takes it u delete
11/16/2004 c1 el
i haf 2 do long way, maybe 50 by 2 days from now.
i haf 2 do long way, maybe 50 by 2 days from now.
11/16/2004 c1 el
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)
11/16/2004 c1 el
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)
11/16/2004 c1 el
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)
11/16/2004 c1 el
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)
ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)