
3/25/2005 c1
16sam the bear
That is the very reason i try to distance myself and the foul four letter word starting with 'L'

That is the very reason i try to distance myself and the foul four letter word starting with 'L'
8/30/2004 c1
13painting-on-the-wall
That's a really touching poem, it holds simple words that convey so much emotion to the reader.. you can feel the woman's pain. Great work! And thanks very much for my review!

That's a really touching poem, it holds simple words that convey so much emotion to the reader.. you can feel the woman's pain. Great work! And thanks very much for my review!
8/27/2004 c1
1shedyourmask
wow... that was so powerfull... I actually had tears in my eyes when I read it. I think that you did a fantastic job. I loved it

wow... that was so powerfull... I actually had tears in my eyes when I read it. I think that you did a fantastic job. I loved it
8/23/2004 c1
13through these jaded eyes
YAY! people like it, they really like it!
i noe it's sad that i review my own poem, but im so ecstatic that i have to say: i love you all!

YAY! people like it, they really like it!
i noe it's sad that i review my own poem, but im so ecstatic that i have to say: i love you all!
8/22/2004 c1
9AgtBauer24
I really like this poem, I can really feel the emotions of this girl by reading this poem. Good job!

I really like this poem, I can really feel the emotions of this girl by reading this poem. Good job!
8/22/2004 c1
12Yuyuto
Pretty good, i likies it, very sweet, oh and thanks for the review plz if u get the chance read and review Bounty 105 I'd really apprechiate it, oh and i should have a update for The Girl In The Door up soon.
==Yuyuto==

Pretty good, i likies it, very sweet, oh and thanks for the review plz if u get the chance read and review Bounty 105 I'd really apprechiate it, oh and i should have a update for The Girl In The Door up soon.
==Yuyuto==
8/21/2004 c1
49SleepDontWeep
WOW! so much emotion poured out! how did u do that? it was simply amazing! i wud add this to my faves if it wasnt full! well done! much love and admiration to u!
o cud u please review sum of my stuff? espeacially one of my storys!

WOW! so much emotion poured out! how did u do that? it was simply amazing! i wud add this to my faves if it wasnt full! well done! much love and admiration to u!
o cud u please review sum of my stuff? espeacially one of my storys!
8/21/2004 c1
15littlemarenengh
wow...that was really good. it was like i was trapped in the poem and wanted to know more.
that was great. keep writing!
love,
littlemaren
p.s.-R&R my pieces!

wow...that was really good. it was like i was trapped in the poem and wanted to know more.
that was great. keep writing!
love,
littlemaren
p.s.-R&R my pieces!