for Magnetic12/28/2004 c1 catseyeview
I love the opening of "storm blue petal," just jumps out and grabs you right away, "Goddess of Mist," I can see. The imagery is so mystically clear and beautiful.
I love the opening of "storm blue petal," just jumps out and grabs you right away, "Goddess of Mist," I can see. The imagery is so mystically clear and beautiful.
9/14/2004 c1 
123alors
I definitely get a misty feeling out of this... again with the forgotten dreams. Mist, sea, and a little bit of rain.
A beautiful feeling, once again.
123alorsI definitely get a misty feeling out of this... again with the forgotten dreams. Mist, sea, and a little bit of rain.
A beautiful feeling, once again.
8/26/2004 c1 30saiya-jinmira
hmm...this is very interesting in a way its like my abstract poems I like it cause its...different and in a good way... Mira
30saiya-jinmirahmm...this is very interesting in a way its like my abstract poems I like it cause its...different and in a good way... Mira
8/22/2004 c1 13JudgementMathew
hey sry i havent been keeping up with everything my email i am suspicous of it that is why i have not sent you those pics i promised when everythings worked out with my comp i will. On the note of the poem its pretty good not one of your best and a little short but this might sound stupid but it reminds me of the beaches in rhode island during the night.
Ma†
13JudgementMathewhey sry i havent been keeping up with everything my email i am suspicous of it that is why i have not sent you those pics i promised when everythings worked out with my comp i will. On the note of the poem its pretty good not one of your best and a little short but this might sound stupid but it reminds me of the beaches in rhode island during the night.
Ma†
8/21/2004 c1 137Ria Mala
Definately seems to have a blue sea motif going. 'Tis cool how you made it based on those magnets. Gotta love those things.
137Ria MalaDefinately seems to have a blue sea motif going. 'Tis cool how you made it based on those magnets. Gotta love those things.
8/21/2004 c1 7bassplayer
That's one of the best descriptions I've seen in some time: "storm blue petal".
Hah. Refridgerator-magnet style? Awesome.
7bassplayerThat's one of the best descriptions I've seen in some time: "storm blue petal".
Hah. Refridgerator-magnet style? Awesome.