
10/3/2004 c1
48Sun Chime
Oui, Que est que? Non, non... j'adore il. I doubt thats even partially correct...but great poem.

Oui, Que est que? Non, non... j'adore il. I doubt thats even partially correct...but great poem.
8/22/2004 c1
11Cloud Burst
whoa great poem! ur descriptions r so mesmerizing, like ' the golden god steals a peek from behind the suspended dew..' i could go and on forever!

whoa great poem! ur descriptions r so mesmerizing, like ' the golden god steals a peek from behind the suspended dew..' i could go and on forever!
8/22/2004 c1
234The Moribund Marionette
Very beautiful. I could paint a mental picture in my mind of this as I read it. Good job!
r/r some of my stuff if you want to, and keep up the creative work!
~Writer of Darkness~

Very beautiful. I could paint a mental picture in my mind of this as I read it. Good job!
r/r some of my stuff if you want to, and keep up the creative work!
~Writer of Darkness~