for Against All Odds8/26/2010 c1 heelsovrhead
Your first chapter kinda drew me in. And I understand why you would take the rest off. I think that's really smart. I'm going to try to join Live Journal now & hopefully I'll get to read the rest of this amazing story.
Your first chapter kinda drew me in. And I understand why you would take the rest off. I think that's really smart. I'm going to try to join Live Journal now & hopefully I'll get to read the rest of this amazing story.
8/25/2010 c41 
3donttrustme
ok, i read your story a little while back when i didnt have an account and i loved it. now that i find it again, i cant read it! :( but its ok, im gunna go fill out a plagiarism heaven form now!
3donttrustmeok, i read your story a little while back when i didnt have an account and i loved it. now that i find it again, i cant read it! :( but its ok, im gunna go fill out a plagiarism heaven form now!
8/23/2010 c1 Aalieyah
I absolutely love this story, it's one of the best I've read on fictionpress. So sorry you've got plagiarised :( But I remember this story from a while ago, and I love the ending! Raleigh is great character and Ryan is perfect for her :) Keep up the good writing!
I absolutely love this story, it's one of the best I've read on fictionpress. So sorry you've got plagiarised :( But I remember this story from a while ago, and I love the ending! Raleigh is great character and Ryan is perfect for her :) Keep up the good writing!
8/19/2010 c1 lairwin
i'm so interested in what happens next! you're a really great writer. such a shame it was removed
i'm so interested in what happens next! you're a really great writer. such a shame it was removed
8/15/2010 c2 2Dancer.In.The.Rain
Im sorry about you being plagiarized...I really liked reading this story before you removed it :(
2Dancer.In.The.RainIm sorry about you being plagiarized...I really liked reading this story before you removed it :(
8/13/2010 c2 just another one
its also sad when a good author is plagirarised. =( im sucks that you had to move your stories along with the author. i think i will go join the live journal community because i was hooked to this story with only the first chapter
its also sad when a good author is plagirarised. =( im sucks that you had to move your stories along with the author. i think i will go join the live journal community because i was hooked to this story with only the first chapter
8/12/2010 c1 flowingypsy
Hello I read this story I think about a year or two years ago. At first when I joined this site I was a silent reader but now I understand why reviews are so important to authors. I began writing my stories and I realised that reviews show a writer how much their writing has improved and what they liked in the story and what they didn't like.
So now I am going to start my review:
When I read this story, it was very memorable. I cannot forget how great this story is and how it inspired me to write my stories. I love the constant friendly banter between Ryan and Rayleigh, it is extremely entertaining; I loved the way you wrote their sort of "hatred" between them and how it progressed into friendship and then feelings between them. It has realism in the story compared to other stories I have read on Fictionpress.
When I read this story and your other stories I thought that you must have had worked so hard at your writing techniques but I truly believe that it is raw talent and I hope that your writing blossoms and your stories remain and continue to become more creative.
Thank you so much for posting this story online and I am truly sorry that people in this world are cruel and plagarised your stories, I am glad that this terrible act hasn't destroyed your passion for writing.
I hope you have a great end of the week and an enjoyable weekend!
x
Hello I read this story I think about a year or two years ago. At first when I joined this site I was a silent reader but now I understand why reviews are so important to authors. I began writing my stories and I realised that reviews show a writer how much their writing has improved and what they liked in the story and what they didn't like.
So now I am going to start my review:
When I read this story, it was very memorable. I cannot forget how great this story is and how it inspired me to write my stories. I love the constant friendly banter between Ryan and Rayleigh, it is extremely entertaining; I loved the way you wrote their sort of "hatred" between them and how it progressed into friendship and then feelings between them. It has realism in the story compared to other stories I have read on Fictionpress.
When I read this story and your other stories I thought that you must have had worked so hard at your writing techniques but I truly believe that it is raw talent and I hope that your writing blossoms and your stories remain and continue to become more creative.
Thank you so much for posting this story online and I am truly sorry that people in this world are cruel and plagarised your stories, I am glad that this terrible act hasn't destroyed your passion for writing.
I hope you have a great end of the week and an enjoyable weekend!
x
8/8/2010 c1 xvanillaxsugarsterx
ughh i'm so pissed that people were dumb enough to steal your work because this was one of the first fictionpress stories i'd ever read and it was so good and i'm sad it's not on here anymore.
ughh i'm so pissed that people were dumb enough to steal your work because this was one of the first fictionpress stories i'd ever read and it was so good and i'm sad it's not on here anymore.
7/31/2010 c1 JeanieRawr
WOW! You guys are a seriously awesome, talented people. You guys are probably the BEST writers here. This is an amazing chapter and I wish I could read the rest of it. I think the plagiarism you guys had to go through with is horrible. No one has the rights to copy and take credit of your stories and your hardwork at all. I do wish I had been there before it to read your wonderful story. Good luck with what you're doing! :]
WOW! You guys are a seriously awesome, talented people. You guys are probably the BEST writers here. This is an amazing chapter and I wish I could read the rest of it. I think the plagiarism you guys had to go through with is horrible. No one has the rights to copy and take credit of your stories and your hardwork at all. I do wish I had been there before it to read your wonderful story. Good luck with what you're doing! :]
7/26/2010 c1 6DolphinWriter88
I recently re-read my previous review for this story and thought it sounded a bit ridiculous, so here I will try again:
I *respect* you so much as a writer for removing your story from FictionPress and I support you 100% in your decision. As before, I wish you and your fellow writers all the best with PlagiarismHaven and hope you never have to deal with plagiarism again.
Forever and Always,
DolphinWriter88
6DolphinWriter88I recently re-read my previous review for this story and thought it sounded a bit ridiculous, so here I will try again:
I *respect* you so much as a writer for removing your story from FictionPress and I support you 100% in your decision. As before, I wish you and your fellow writers all the best with PlagiarismHaven and hope you never have to deal with plagiarism again.
Forever and Always,
DolphinWriter88
7/23/2010 c1 DancerG20777
amazing first chapter! wish i could read more! i'm sorry you were plagarized!
amazing first chapter! wish i could read more! i'm sorry you were plagarized!
7/22/2010 c1 Odalisquia
This is a lovely first chapter :)
I really wish I had joined Fictionpress early enough to read all your stories. Judging by the quality of this opening chapter, the amount of reviews, and the SKoW fame you have, I really missed out.
Loved this bit, and the few lines following it: "Noelle had said he was good-looking, and if I used some imagination, I almost could see it." I like how Raleigh is so vehemently opposed to males, haha. And the description of Ryan was very well done! I gotta admit, I'm a sucker for black hair and blue eyes.
Anyway, I just wanted you to know how great your writing is. I'm so sorry you got plagiarized; and I'm sorry it resulted in the removal of amazing stories, though that's mostly a selfish sadness, because I completely understand why you did it. So yeah. I hope your work is safe in Plagiarism Haven, and I hope that someday I'll be able to read a full story of yours.
Thank you :)
This is a lovely first chapter :)
I really wish I had joined Fictionpress early enough to read all your stories. Judging by the quality of this opening chapter, the amount of reviews, and the SKoW fame you have, I really missed out.
Loved this bit, and the few lines following it: "Noelle had said he was good-looking, and if I used some imagination, I almost could see it." I like how Raleigh is so vehemently opposed to males, haha. And the description of Ryan was very well done! I gotta admit, I'm a sucker for black hair and blue eyes.
Anyway, I just wanted you to know how great your writing is. I'm so sorry you got plagiarized; and I'm sorry it resulted in the removal of amazing stories, though that's mostly a selfish sadness, because I completely understand why you did it. So yeah. I hope your work is safe in Plagiarism Haven, and I hope that someday I'll be able to read a full story of yours.
Thank you :)
7/18/2010 c1 nicolekim94
Although this is only one chapter, this story captured my attention especially because of the writing style and that they girl is a man hater :P I just thought that the idea of a girl's older brother's best friend and the girl falling in love seemed a little cliche. Even if the ending is predictable, I'm curious to see what happens between the two people :D By any chance, do you write your stories on any experience or friend's experience? I was just wondering, because then it would make it even more real XD
Although this is only one chapter, this story captured my attention especially because of the writing style and that they girl is a man hater :P I just thought that the idea of a girl's older brother's best friend and the girl falling in love seemed a little cliche. Even if the ending is predictable, I'm curious to see what happens between the two people :D By any chance, do you write your stories on any experience or friend's experience? I was just wondering, because then it would make it even more real XD
7/16/2010 c1 1araluth-the-ranger
Hahaha! I loved the first chapter! And the line : "Andy's existence was proof enough that my parents were still having sex" really made me laugh! An uncomfortable human truth, lol. Anyway I understand why you have taken the story down, and I don't blame you! But because I am greedy for interesting stories I hope to leave a review for every single one of your chapters on FP in the hopes I can get accepted in plagiarism haven. And I'll be doing it for the other authors of PH too ;)
1araluth-the-rangerHahaha! I loved the first chapter! And the line : "Andy's existence was proof enough that my parents were still having sex" really made me laugh! An uncomfortable human truth, lol. Anyway I understand why you have taken the story down, and I don't blame you! But because I am greedy for interesting stories I hope to leave a review for every single one of your chapters on FP in the hopes I can get accepted in plagiarism haven. And I'll be doing it for the other authors of PH too ;)