for Flame Extinguished10/11/2005 c1 aknightsgoldenrose
I like the descriptions of the cold snowy day and then the fire of the phoenix.
I like the descriptions of the cold snowy day and then the fire of the phoenix.
9/19/2004 c1 
108Jo The Pirate
This is beautiful, it flows nicely. I loved the theme of this poem. One thing, though - I think you used the word Phoenix too much, it was starting to get repetitive. ‡ Nice poem.
108Jo The PirateThis is beautiful, it flows nicely. I loved the theme of this poem. One thing, though - I think you used the word Phoenix too much, it was starting to get repetitive. ‡ Nice poem.