for Let Them Think9/1/2004 c1 
3blank canvas
very emotional. it is very true that friends can very quickly become like "vipers", but it also gives us a reminder to see if WE have changed, or OUR FRIENDS have changed. awesome job
3blank canvasvery emotional. it is very true that friends can very quickly become like "vipers", but it also gives us a reminder to see if WE have changed, or OUR FRIENDS have changed. awesome job
8/24/2004 c1 29Aeritone
I took your suggestion at the top and I read it out loud...wow...it sounds a little scarier when it's being read aloud. Very good work...I think my favourite set of lines is 'Twisted forked tongues that once dripped with honey'...I loved that. Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing!
-Sarah/Aeritone
29AeritoneI took your suggestion at the top and I read it out loud...wow...it sounds a little scarier when it's being read aloud. Very good work...I think my favourite set of lines is 'Twisted forked tongues that once dripped with honey'...I loved that. Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing!
-Sarah/Aeritone