
5/22/2005 c9 XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX XXXXX
Ugh! Pressed for time, can't review, this is the best I can say: It was very, very good!
BTW: Could you check out my new story PHONEN?
Ah! I really have to go now!
Ugh! Pressed for time, can't review, this is the best I can say: It was very, very good!
BTW: Could you check out my new story PHONEN?
Ah! I really have to go now!
5/22/2005 c9 404358034958034
I know how you feel, man. My homework load should be winding down a bit now that the seniors have left, but some teachers have no mercy.
Ooh! It be gettin' hot'n'heavy in Fangora!
I know how you feel, man. My homework load should be winding down a bit now that the seniors have left, but some teachers have no mercy.
Ooh! It be gettin' hot'n'heavy in Fangora!
3/2/2005 c8
11Wolfie Star26
finally. *rolls eyes* Hehe, I was going to review yesterday, but I was running late for class. This was aweosme, I loved it. things with Sirus is going to be very strange. update soon.

finally. *rolls eyes* Hehe, I was going to review yesterday, but I was running late for class. This was aweosme, I loved it. things with Sirus is going to be very strange. update soon.
3/1/2005 c8
31Shadow Gryphon
*grimaces* I don't like the priests. Priests rub me the wrong way. I wouldn't be surprised if they were the ones poisoning the king. And who's the little voice? His conscience? Or a fate... or something?
Hrm... Story's going very well! Liked this chapter!
Gryph

*grimaces* I don't like the priests. Priests rub me the wrong way. I wouldn't be surprised if they were the ones poisoning the king. And who's the little voice? His conscience? Or a fate... or something?
Hrm... Story's going very well! Liked this chapter!
Gryph
3/1/2005 c8 XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX XXXXX
Well, this is REALLY good! This is one of my favorite stories, keep it up! This is a rival to LOTR, in my opinion. If this were in a store, I'd buy it in two seconds flat (or slightly longer, if there was a line at the checkout XP)
Well, this is REALLY good! This is one of my favorite stories, keep it up! This is a rival to LOTR, in my opinion. If this were in a store, I'd buy it in two seconds flat (or slightly longer, if there was a line at the checkout XP)
3/1/2005 c8 404358034958034
Oh. Mysterioso. It sounds like everyone is dieing. *puzzles* I think the king is definitely done for. Poor King Sirus. :.( See how I weep for him?
Oh. Mysterioso. It sounds like everyone is dieing. *puzzles* I think the king is definitely done for. Poor King Sirus. :.( See how I weep for him?
2/27/2005 c7
12SkyeWolf25
Sorry about being so long on return reviews. I share your pain on the workload. I think my poor brain is going to eventually explode. Still, add me to the Math Haters Club, my hatred of PreCalulus still burns long, strong, and bright. Still, thank you for all the reviews you have sent my way, I feel terrible that I haven't had a chance to respond as quickly as I would have liked. But I am here now. This story, so far, is the only one of yours that is really active anymore. Still, its coming along very well. I really think I like your take on fantasy writing. What can I say? You have a way with words that is really unmatched in the world of writing. Still, you have left me at one of your infamous cliffees, so update soon on alot of things, not just "The Secrets of Fangora", but all the others! Your depriving me of Alaeric time for Pete's sake! Again, thanks, you are a good luck charm, you should know! Thak you again. Till the next time. UPDATE or I shall slap you!

Sorry about being so long on return reviews. I share your pain on the workload. I think my poor brain is going to eventually explode. Still, add me to the Math Haters Club, my hatred of PreCalulus still burns long, strong, and bright. Still, thank you for all the reviews you have sent my way, I feel terrible that I haven't had a chance to respond as quickly as I would have liked. But I am here now. This story, so far, is the only one of yours that is really active anymore. Still, its coming along very well. I really think I like your take on fantasy writing. What can I say? You have a way with words that is really unmatched in the world of writing. Still, you have left me at one of your infamous cliffees, so update soon on alot of things, not just "The Secrets of Fangora", but all the others! Your depriving me of Alaeric time for Pete's sake! Again, thanks, you are a good luck charm, you should know! Thak you again. Till the next time. UPDATE or I shall slap you!
1/5/2005 c6
12SkyeWolf25
Hmm...I see the journey is truly beginning now and I would pay gold to know what transpired between the father and his daughter. Whatever it was, it seems to have truly set the plot into motion. Bravo, now update soon!

Hmm...I see the journey is truly beginning now and I would pay gold to know what transpired between the father and his daughter. Whatever it was, it seems to have truly set the plot into motion. Bravo, now update soon!
1/5/2005 c5 SkyeWolf25
I think sending TTD off to a publisher is a very good idea. Its a great story and who couldn't resist its lore? Okay now that I have finished speaking out of turn on TTD lets get to SF to let me compliemnt you on this chapter. So this is where everything truly begins and you did a excellent job! Loved it!
I think sending TTD off to a publisher is a very good idea. Its a great story and who couldn't resist its lore? Okay now that I have finished speaking out of turn on TTD lets get to SF to let me compliemnt you on this chapter. So this is where everything truly begins and you did a excellent job! Loved it!
1/5/2005 c4 SkyeWolf25
Oh, Alareic, where have gone? It seems as though you have dropped off the face of the good old earth. . .I have had a rather difficult time finding a way of getting ahold of you and thankfully there were a couple chapters to SF that I had missed. Good chapter by the way, though your formatting of it puzzled me a little. Why such big blank margins? Are you trying to emphasize whats going on or do you have another idea hidden up your sleave? Anyway, chapter 11 to CK has been posted.
Oh, Alareic, where have gone? It seems as though you have dropped off the face of the good old earth. . .I have had a rather difficult time finding a way of getting ahold of you and thankfully there were a couple chapters to SF that I had missed. Good chapter by the way, though your formatting of it puzzled me a little. Why such big blank margins? Are you trying to emphasize whats going on or do you have another idea hidden up your sleave? Anyway, chapter 11 to CK has been posted.
12/30/2004 c6 XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX XXXXX
Wow, this story is really developing! I like it a lot, it is now my second favorite out of them all! (which is saying something, my old second favorite was a nice piece of work) Sorry, but it still doesn't beat Shadow Drive, but still, this is an awesome story!
Wow, this story is really developing! I like it a lot, it is now my second favorite out of them all! (which is saying something, my old second favorite was a nice piece of work) Sorry, but it still doesn't beat Shadow Drive, but still, this is an awesome story!
12/30/2004 c4 XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX XXXXX
Gak! Three minutes to read two more chapters! Gotta' go fast! (as you may have guessed, I'm pressed for time)
Gak! Three minutes to read two more chapters! Gotta' go fast! (as you may have guessed, I'm pressed for time)