for Black Coffee6/21/2018 c1 
4Your Girl
Have you heard of a Mary Sue?
And clarifying that hugging her little brother wasn't sexual is a really weird direction to take it. Isn't that just ... implied?
4Your GirlHave you heard of a Mary Sue?
And clarifying that hugging her little brother wasn't sexual is a really weird direction to take it. Isn't that just ... implied?
8/15/2012 c12 twibbit
:))) I like how dark this story is :p I think it adds more depth instead of the typical self pity and I'm going to blame myself while wallowing story you know :p? Update soon :)
:))) I like how dark this story is :p I think it adds more depth instead of the typical self pity and I'm going to blame myself while wallowing story you know :p? Update soon :)
5/16/2008 c12 2katieee
Im addicted.
to this story.
And. . .theres no more chapters.
Gah.
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Im really really into this story.
I love it so much.
Wow.
:]
2katieeeIm addicted.
to this story.
And. . .theres no more chapters.
Gah.
:[
Im really really into this story.
I love it so much.
Wow.
:]
5/16/2008 c11 katieee
Oh dear.
He knows now.
Maybe it's better?
Maybe it's not.
But that girl; I don't like her.
Oh dear.
He knows now.
Maybe it's better?
Maybe it's not.
But that girl; I don't like her.
5/16/2008 c10 katieee
Wow; at first I was shaken by Arty's thought about wishing it was anyone even Erin except her. It was kind of selfish but I can't even bring myself to want to keep that word there since she was getting raped. Wow.
And then Ian said her name! Im so happy.
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And then Alex came into the end.
And it was perfect.
:]
Wow; at first I was shaken by Arty's thought about wishing it was anyone even Erin except her. It was kind of selfish but I can't even bring myself to want to keep that word there since she was getting raped. Wow.
And then Ian said her name! Im so happy.
:]
And then Alex came into the end.
And it was perfect.
:]
5/16/2008 c9 katieee
:] I like Alex. Ahahahhaha, I don't have much else to say. except AH. She found him. - I kind of forgot about that part by the end though. :] My minds wrapped up around Alex
:] I like Alex. Ahahahhaha, I don't have much else to say. except AH. She found him. - I kind of forgot about that part by the end though. :] My minds wrapped up around Alex
5/16/2008 c7 katieee
I liked this chapter.
Every story I read the girl seems to run all the time.
God, I want to do that.
I have a really huge urge to run right now.
I liked this chapter.
Every story I read the girl seems to run all the time.
God, I want to do that.
I have a really huge urge to run right now.
5/16/2008 c3 katieee
Just so you know, I think you missed a 'y' in body because it just says boy in the ninth paragraph from the bottom.
I kind of think its funny that her clothing measurements are all messed up. :]
Just so you know, I think you missed a 'y' in body because it just says boy in the ninth paragraph from the bottom.
I kind of think its funny that her clothing measurements are all messed up. :]
5/16/2008 c1 katieee
Wow, the ending was really intense.
But Im glad Erin was it - ? - was the first to find Arty and to stay with her.
But im really sad she had to go.
Wow, the ending was really intense.
But Im glad Erin was it - ? - was the first to find Arty and to stay with her.
But im really sad she had to go.