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2/4/2005 c1 9Michael Gerard
Brilliant again. You're so good at writing these haikus. Keep it up!
1/31/2005 c1 31Whatever-I-Say
Amazing haiku! I think a lot of people can relate to this. Your choice of words amaze me in you haikus, very captivating! ~Keep writing!
11/5/2004 c1 29white-clouds
Simple but very strong.
~Lara;)
10/20/2004 c1 2philoslove
This happens all the time when I'm holding a donation can out to people in town. So true...
9/1/2004 c1 31Beyond The Dark Side
Really good, I like the way you write.
'Shippou'
8/29/2004 c1 9twilightwriter07
Lovely...simply fantastic. =)
8/27/2004 c1 186Emi Amara
Hi! This is sad, but powerful. Well done
**WG
8/26/2004 c1 22MorbidMan
Nice one. I enjoyed this.
8/26/2004 c1 silversilk
Three words: I love it.
8/25/2004 c1 10Meleny
Interesting, I liked the summary it did justice to the poem and I find it hard to find ones that do. I like this one, I feel like I kinda relate to it. Good Job Cupcake;)
-Mel
8/25/2004 c1 Infamous Writer
Nicely done. I haven't read haikus very much but you seem to write them very well.
8/25/2004 c1 David Stephen
You are brilliant at writing these Haikus. They appear to come so naturally to you - and they are not forced and flow wonderfully. I will read the story you have added in due course (I am currently so busy).
~David~
8/25/2004 c1 1SweetMisery15
I feel like that sometimes

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