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4/30/2005 c1 64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle
some shades are just darker than others
9/7/2004 c1 3Powerof1P3PadfootsGrl
awesome! I feel the same way..people all hurt inside, it's just some people hide it better than others...great job!
9/7/2004 c1 kdatlyno
I'd love to hear this with musical accompaniment... kind of makes me think of a dark acoustic sound, for some reason. The last two lines are particularly fitting... "Shades of same, these shades of shame". Accurate and powerful.
8/31/2004 c1 139eyluvmusic
I love the rhyming in this. It´s very heartfelt( that´s a very good thing) and that´s what draws me into reading this piece. Very well written! Keep up the great work!
8/25/2004 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
AWESOME! I love the raw emotion in this song! Excellent work!
8/25/2004 c1 21Phoenix-Pen
There's a LOT of emotion in this. It feels like it has a story behind it. May I ask why you use "cuz" rather than "'cause"? This ISN'T a criticism, I believe language should be fairly free, especially in poems, but I'm always curious to know people's reasons for their choice of language/words.
8/25/2004 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Wow, you tell a compelling and complex story here. I really love the shades of shame metaphor that you used, very unique, I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.

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