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11/1/2004 c1 13sunscraped
I personally am atheist so i don't read these poems too often, but... This one makes sense and it's different from all the gratingly direct and commanding ones...
~!
8/27/2004 c1 5Blackout the Swordsman
The most I can say is that the words "still small" should be joined by an n dash, so it reads "still-small." I can't think of what else to say.
8/27/2004 c1 1always loving someone
oh wow! i am just reading this. sorry, barely. i feel so loved that someone dedicated something to me. thanks!
8/27/2004 c1 lyricalprose
Oh no honey, I'm not old lol I just feel old. Thank you for the review/comment. It's appreciated
8/25/2004 c1 28my-vision
i love how you're not ashamed to proclaim your Christianity! GO GOD! He deserves the best!
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