for Fireworks3/9/2005 c1 Sabretooth
As I started from the bottom of your profile and am moving upwards to The Search, so far everything has been sad and it is nice to know that you can do happy imagery just as well as the sad. I loved this poem, I only wish my own was this good.
As I started from the bottom of your profile and am moving upwards to The Search, so far everything has been sad and it is nice to know that you can do happy imagery just as well as the sad. I loved this poem, I only wish my own was this good.
1/20/2005 c1 Burke
When I see fireworks again, I'll remember the fireworks in the young woman's heart.
You are a writer.
When I see fireworks again, I'll remember the fireworks in the young woman's heart.
You are a writer.
12/9/2004 c1 
1Alzemu
nice poem...you really are a good writer...i'm not really the type to be writing a poem but i really like reading one and your's is really amazing it makes me dream about it.
ps.could you read my fantasy weird story that i wrote if you have time?
pps. i'm adding you to my fav author list so i can read all ur writing...hope you don't mind.
1Alzemunice poem...you really are a good writer...i'm not really the type to be writing a poem but i really like reading one and your's is really amazing it makes me dream about it.
ps.could you read my fantasy weird story that i wrote if you have time?
pps. i'm adding you to my fav author list so i can read all ur writing...hope you don't mind.
12/8/2004 c1 45Sammy- B
wow this is so sweet! the rhyming is awesome and it flows really well, great job!
45Sammy- Bwow this is so sweet! the rhyming is awesome and it flows really well, great job!
12/7/2004 c1 Ariaenia
Ilove it! I've had a similar experience, and I can say that you have done beautifully with portatying it here. Keep it up!
Ilove it! I've had a similar experience, and I can say that you have done beautifully with portatying it here. Keep it up!
9/17/2004 c1 2April Unicat
Well, hey there! I really really like this poem and (::sigh::) wish that it could come true for me. lol. anyway, i think this is really cool and thanks so much for reviewing my story. Dream People is kinda just a one-shot story and i don't think you should expect any more chapters coming from it. I'm probably going to be taking it down soon. If you want to, you can read my much better story up there, "Elements: Earth, Air, Fire, Water" but i will discourage you from reading it until i put in my profile that it's chapters 1-7 are completely revised. The story is in kind of a state of chaos at the moment and needs serious revising, which (unfortunately) i have barely any time for, seeing as i just started my first year in high school and i'm still trying to adjust. (i've only been in high school for three weeks now and i already hate it) well, until next time!
~April~
2April UnicatWell, hey there! I really really like this poem and (::sigh::) wish that it could come true for me. lol. anyway, i think this is really cool and thanks so much for reviewing my story. Dream People is kinda just a one-shot story and i don't think you should expect any more chapters coming from it. I'm probably going to be taking it down soon. If you want to, you can read my much better story up there, "Elements: Earth, Air, Fire, Water" but i will discourage you from reading it until i put in my profile that it's chapters 1-7 are completely revised. The story is in kind of a state of chaos at the moment and needs serious revising, which (unfortunately) i have barely any time for, seeing as i just started my first year in high school and i'm still trying to adjust. (i've only been in high school for three weeks now and i already hate it) well, until next time!
~April~
9/12/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
ah i like. especially with the allusion of fireworks here. nice job and kep it up gurl!
3Cry Tears of Darknessah i like. especially with the allusion of fireworks here. nice job and kep it up gurl!
9/12/2004 c1 25Charisma101
OH MY GOODNESS! This was so beautifully written! How do you do it, i actually felt like i was there with my boyfrined! AHH god, please tell me how u do it! lol, if you can review some of my things please? lol your going on my favorites!
25Charisma101OH MY GOODNESS! This was so beautifully written! How do you do it, i actually felt like i was there with my boyfrined! AHH god, please tell me how u do it! lol, if you can review some of my things please? lol your going on my favorites!
9/12/2004 c1 butterflydreaming
I didn't have enough time to read anything longer than a poem, so I picked this one. It's so romantic and sweet and lovely! I hope that was a true story. It made me smile.
Really, it's full of beautiful imagery; I can just see the lights and almost hear the sounds of exploding fireworks.
I didn't have enough time to read anything longer than a poem, so I picked this one. It's so romantic and sweet and lovely! I hope that was a true story. It made me smile.
Really, it's full of beautiful imagery; I can just see the lights and almost hear the sounds of exploding fireworks.
8/28/2004 c1 1Genius-Ben
I almost hate to admit it but I actually like this poem. It is very well written, good rhyme and rythm.
Bravo.
1Genius-BenI almost hate to admit it but I actually like this poem. It is very well written, good rhyme and rythm.
Bravo.
8/28/2004 c1 30Silvra Gregorio
wow! that is beautiful! i can envision the entire scene! great job!
Ty for reading my ...erm journal entry... i'll read your story as soon as i can... i promise... but i didn't write it on purpose:-s LOL
Either way...more important here is the beauty of this poem...the stregth of it is marvelous, great job! hugs, bear.
30Silvra Gregoriowow! that is beautiful! i can envision the entire scene! great job!
Ty for reading my ...erm journal entry... i'll read your story as soon as i can... i promise... but i didn't write it on purpose:-s LOL
Either way...more important here is the beauty of this poem...the stregth of it is marvelous, great job! hugs, bear.
8/25/2004 c1 32finally-defeated
okay i've most likely read this before seeing as it's familiar but here i am nevertheless. congratz and i am proud to be ...okay i forgot what i was saying so let's say canadian? lol lub panda girly's poem...elynny harhar
kick ass dahlinz
peaceout rock on fading
-nessa
32finally-defeatedokay i've most likely read this before seeing as it's familiar but here i am nevertheless. congratz and i am proud to be ...okay i forgot what i was saying so let's say canadian? lol lub panda girly's poem...elynny harhar
kick ass dahlinz
peaceout rock on fading
-nessa