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9/2/2004 c1 kayttea
aw, this is great!
i really really really love it. i've been haveing a bad day and for somereason this made me smile. thanks. definatly on my favorites. great for a first song. :-) great.
-Kashe
Ah, hurricanes. The evilness.
8/26/2004 c1 24My-BleedingPen98
The meaning is good.. ur words and phrases arent, and ur flow isnt. needs work. If you keep writing, ull get better.. u shoudl see some of my first poems.. lol
8/26/2004 c1 why do you care
i cant believe no one has reviewed this yet! i got first review mwahahahahahahahhahahahaha...
anyway, its really good but you have to work on your rythym.

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