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7/28/2014 c1 Guest
i love me sum elefunts
8/31/2004 c1 67BERRYLICIOUS
aww, this is so cute, i love it! i think its great that you can have rotten berries and elephants all in the same poem, haha. good job
8/26/2004 c1 191Trinity Joselyn Carter
really cool... it sounds like a poem for a child... but it's so cool! like shel silverstein
8/26/2004 c1 18chicastar5
er...cute,kinda lol rhymeing(or however you spell it) was good,and it teaches a good lesson(dont eat anchovies with rotten berries!) LOL so..uhh good job
and do you mnd looking at one of my poems?
Kari~
8/26/2004 c1 29Aeritone
What a whimsical poem! The images are well-constructed, and it's a fun read! Keep writing!
-Sarah/Aeritone

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