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12/9/2004 c1 Subdued Silence
Oo0o.. pretty. I like. =]
8/26/2004 c1 34WizardOfWinter
Oh wow, awesome. This poem is totally AWESOME! GrEaT jOb!
8/26/2004 c1 8Midnight Proc
Loved your imagery... I really liked the unique rhyming scheme. The only thing that disrupted my reading flow was your repetition of "thus" - you probably put that in on purpose, but I felt that it disturbed the flow too much. Otherwise, great poem!

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