7/13/2008 c16 HappyLittleLoser
this is quite fantastical, congrats
(i really want the happy ending now, pronto) =)
this is quite fantastical, congrats
(i really want the happy ending now, pronto) =)
6/22/2008 c15 3babyonyee
that letter was so bittersweet...it was a really good chap and it was really sad. I hope you update asap!
that letter was so bittersweet...it was a really good chap and it was really sad. I hope you update asap!
6/17/2008 c14 3babyonyee
good chap! they are such a cute couple...but drama always mean bad things...but anyways keep up the good work!
good chap! they are such a cute couple...but drama always mean bad things...but anyways keep up the good work!
3/6/2008 c12 Li
hey this is great, and i'm glad you got another chapter out but it seems like you skipped a chapter, cause it goes from Chapter 10 to Chapter 12, and we know nothing about her dad's visit.. which I'd love to see! anyway i cant wait till the next chappie!
hey this is great, and i'm glad you got another chapter out but it seems like you skipped a chapter, cause it goes from Chapter 10 to Chapter 12, and we know nothing about her dad's visit.. which I'd love to see! anyway i cant wait till the next chappie!
2/5/2008 c2 6LadyOfLiterature
Ooh. I really like the chemistry that's building between Charity and Chris. Well written.xx
Ooh. I really like the chemistry that's building between Charity and Chris. Well written.xx
2/1/2008 c1 LadyOfLiterature
“Dude, what the hell is the difference between a conventional oven and a microwave oven?” - This made me laugh for a full minute or so. I enjoyed this chapter, and I like your dialogue. x
“Dude, what the hell is the difference between a conventional oven and a microwave oven?” - This made me laugh for a full minute or so. I enjoyed this chapter, and I like your dialogue. x