for Broken Tears7/6/2005 c13 Angel
Wow, you update too soon :P didn't check, lol. Anyhow, FANTASTIC ending! it's so cute. Derek finally got his true love.
It's been a great story, and i hope you'll write another soon!
Wow, you update too soon :P didn't check, lol. Anyhow, FANTASTIC ending! it's so cute. Derek finally got his true love.
It's been a great story, and i hope you'll write another soon!
5/18/2005 c13 bob
Aw, it's been a great story! love the ending also. good job
Aw, it's been a great story! love the ending also. good job
145/16/2005 c10 angel
OMG! THAT'S THE CUTEST THING I'VE READ IN YEARS! Great job! Glad you finally posted and did you exams, please! UPDATE SOON!
OMG! THAT'S THE CUTEST THING I'VE READ IN YEARS! Great job! Glad you finally posted and did you exams, please! UPDATE SOON!
5/14/2005 c10 chen
SO FUNNY, THAT'S JUST LIKE ME! hehe derek's cute. great job, and do continue, preferabely before i'm 20. chill
SO FUNNY, THAT'S JUST LIKE ME! hehe derek's cute. great job, and do continue, preferabely before i'm 20. chill
1/29/2005 c9 ET
not human... hey... interseting. keep going, you're doing good
not human... hey... interseting. keep going, you're doing good
1/24/2005 c9 angel
aw, that's soo sweet of derek. And the fantasy is just right. Hehe, keep going, good job!
aw, that's soo sweet of derek. And the fantasy is just right. Hehe, keep going, good job!
1/23/2005 c9 booboo
cute... i like the idea that he's not a human hehe, you're very creative!Good job!
cute... i like the idea that he's not a human hehe, you're very creative!Good job!
1/16/2005 c7 ET
Me again, i forget to read the AN, just so you know, i think lily should be with john, and it should be a sad ending for derek. Chill!
Me again, i forget to read the AN, just so you know, i think lily should be with john, and it should be a sad ending for derek. Chill!
1/16/2005 c8 ET
Nice going, then what happened?
Nice going, then what happened?
1/6/2005 c8 Angel
Yes... and? Don't just leave it there! update! i want to know more!
good job by the way
Yes... and? Don't just leave it there! update! i want to know more!
good job by the way
1/6/2005 c8 Angel
Yes... and? Don't just leave it there! update! i want to know more!
good job by the way
Yes... and? Don't just leave it there! update! i want to know more!
good job by the way