for Broken Tears9/9/2004 c3 
24beve
cool..sorry i have to be honest,i didnt really read it properly but from what my pathetic eyes absorbed,its cool.review mine if u have time?thnx
24bevecool..sorry i have to be honest,i didnt really read it properly but from what my pathetic eyes absorbed,its cool.review mine if u have time?thnx
9/8/2004 c3 Jade
hey
okies, the story's great, you really wanna find out what happens next, but just some of the spellings are wrong, that's it.
update soon!
hey
okies, the story's great, you really wanna find out what happens next, but just some of the spellings are wrong, that's it.
update soon!
9/8/2004 c3 Angle
This is so good, too bad lily doesn't like derek... but keep writing. I want to know more!
This is so good, too bad lily doesn't like derek... but keep writing. I want to know more!
9/5/2004 c2 Derek
I like the song
I like the song
9/3/2004 c2 Bob
You didn't even tell me u posted it! Anyhow keep going
You didn't even tell me u posted it! Anyhow keep going
9/3/2004 c2 bloody
Cute =], I like this derek guy, keep writing, I want to find out more about him =d, great job!
Cute =], I like this derek guy, keep writing, I want to find out more about him =d, great job!
9/2/2004 c2 Angel
Great! Keep writing, I want to see who it is going!
Great! Keep writing, I want to see who it is going!
9/1/2004 c2 14Chen
Cute :D, Derek's a thoughful guy... hehe, not many guys like that still exist, haha
great work, keep going
14ChenCute :D, Derek's a thoughful guy... hehe, not many guys like that still exist, haha
great work, keep going
8/28/2004 c1 Derek
Aw... hurt hurt... lol... he deserves it haha... he shouldn't bug her at the first place. But it's quite sad... hehe, do keep going. I wanna read more!
Aw... hurt hurt... lol... he deserves it haha... he shouldn't bug her at the first place. But it's quite sad... hehe, do keep going. I wanna read more!
8/28/2004 c1 random
NICE NICE NICE NICE STORY!GREAT
NICE NICE NICE NICE STORY!GREAT
8/27/2004 c1 Angel
Blah, thought she was a gentle girl, oh well, it's your story. Getting interesting, keep going!
Blah, thought she was a gentle girl, oh well, it's your story. Getting interesting, keep going!
8/26/2004 c1 Chen
Heyhey!
I am so happy, the story is GREAT! Keep working on it, it's GREAT!
Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck!
-Chen
Heyhey!
I am so happy, the story is GREAT! Keep working on it, it's GREAT!
Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck!
-Chen