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9/9/2004 c3 24beve
cool..sorry i have to be honest,i didnt really read it properly but from what my pathetic eyes absorbed,its cool.review mine if u have time?thnx
9/8/2004 c3 Jade
okies, the story's great, you really wanna find out what happens next, but just some of the spellings are wrong, that's it.
update soon!
9/8/2004 c3 Angle
This is so good, too bad lily doesn't like derek... but keep writing. I want to know more!
9/5/2004 c2 Derek
I like the song
9/3/2004 c2 Bob
You didn't even tell me u posted it! Anyhow keep going
9/3/2004 c2 bloody
Cute =], I like this derek guy, keep writing, I want to find out more about him =d, great job!
9/2/2004 c2 Angel
Great! Keep writing, I want to see who it is going!
9/1/2004 c2 White Fallen Angel
great! cute =] Can't wait to find out what's going to happen!
9/1/2004 c2 14Chen
Cute :D, Derek's a thoughful guy... hehe, not many guys like that still exist, haha
great work, keep going
8/28/2004 c1 White Fallen Angel
cute =]
8/28/2004 c1 Derek
Aw... hurt hurt... lol... he deserves it haha... he shouldn't bug her at the first place. But it's quite sad... hehe, do keep going. I wanna read more!
8/28/2004 c1 random
8/27/2004 c1 Angel
Blah, thought she was a gentle girl, oh well, it's your story. Getting interesting, keep going!
8/26/2004 c1 Chen
I am so happy, the story is GREAT! Keep working on it, it's GREAT!
Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck!
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