for Blah10/20/2004 c1 Dorian D
Too lazy to sign in. I checked some of your stuff earlier but kept forgetting to review it. This is very good, nice language, beautiful theme.
Too lazy to sign in. I checked some of your stuff earlier but kept forgetting to review it. This is very good, nice language, beautiful theme.
9/27/2004 c1 
21WiredCrazyFrances
I love this poem. I am going through the exactsame thing right now! You illustrated the emotion well! Great poem!
21WiredCrazyFrancesI love this poem. I am going through the exactsame thing right now! You illustrated the emotion well! Great poem!
9/9/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
Just spread faster then melting butter,... than... but I relaly like this line
We are more then we appear,... than
wow.. I can insanely realte to this.. amazing awesome poem.. great job
612simpleplan13Just spread faster then melting butter,... than... but I relaly like this line
We are more then we appear,... than
wow.. I can insanely realte to this.. amazing awesome poem.. great job
8/30/2004 c1 13painting-on-the-wall
This is a really, really great poem. I can relate so perfectly to it because I'm in the same situation as the poem describes. 12 thumbs up! And thanks for my review!
13painting-on-the-wallThis is a really, really great poem. I can relate so perfectly to it because I'm in the same situation as the poem describes. 12 thumbs up! And thanks for my review!
8/30/2004 c1 jon
its good work but theres nothing in particular that i can point out that i really like.
its good work but theres nothing in particular that i can point out that i really like.
8/27/2004 c1 Unchained Soul
Wow it's beautiful. I like how the heart gets wings, even though it decided to walk, it still flew in the end. I love that concept. Great poem.
Wow it's beautiful. I like how the heart gets wings, even though it decided to walk, it still flew in the end. I love that concept. Great poem.
8/27/2004 c1 Christelle
This poem was absolutely beautiful, i love the line about paying back ur lips. Blwarg!
This poem was absolutely beautiful, i love the line about paying back ur lips. Blwarg!
8/27/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i like this. but maybe get a better title? the poem is SO much better than a title of "blah"... i like it, very good.
3Cry Tears of Darknessi like this. but maybe get a better title? the poem is SO much better than a title of "blah"... i like it, very good.
8/27/2004 c1 84Shaughna
I love this poem...it makes me want to know the two people involved...neways I love the way that it is written although
I would have given ot the title of "Childish Grin" 'cause that seems to be the most powerful two words in the whole poem...good work.
84ShaughnaI love this poem...it makes me want to know the two people involved...neways I love the way that it is written although
I would have given ot the title of "Childish Grin" 'cause that seems to be the most powerful two words in the whole poem...good work.
8/27/2004 c1 13through these jaded eyes
this is so sweet and romantic! the wording was really fantastic, i loved the way you described everything so beautifully! good job!
13through these jaded eyesthis is so sweet and romantic! the wording was really fantastic, i loved the way you described everything so beautifully! good job!