for Fortitude5/10/2005 c1 
4serpent's fire
I like your poem. It really catche my attention. My favorite line was "or keep him 'neath the light of sun", but all of it was good too.
4serpent's fireI like your poem. It really catche my attention. My favorite line was "or keep him 'neath the light of sun", but all of it was good too.
4/8/2005 c1 17thosewhomustbecarried
Triffic. It's great to see a poet with rhythm and a great message in this world where free verse has become standard to everybody and only suicide is a proper topic. ^-^ Very interesting poem, I love the nature theme. Keep it up, cheers.
17thosewhomustbecarriedTriffic. It's great to see a poet with rhythm and a great message in this world where free verse has become standard to everybody and only suicide is a proper topic. ^-^ Very interesting poem, I love the nature theme. Keep it up, cheers.