for Poisoned waters3/14/2005 c1 
3x0x Arsenic And Lace x0x
That was pretty, I love how you describe his laugh - Poisoned water - I hope I get as good as you :)
3x0x Arsenic And Lace x0xThat was pretty, I love how you describe his laugh - Poisoned water - I hope I get as good as you :)
8/25/2003 c1 7Masked Angel
THis is a very nice write. I like the way you use strong visuals and the words flow nicely. Good job!
7Masked AngelTHis is a very nice write. I like the way you use strong visuals and the words flow nicely. Good job!
2/9/2001 c1 1BobbtheElf
I like this . . . alot . . . I like the way it seems dark but it's still very feeling. That kinda stuff really impresses me. *Bobb's stamp of approval*
1BobbtheElfI like this . . . alot . . . I like the way it seems dark but it's still very feeling. That kinda stuff really impresses me. *Bobb's stamp of approval*
2/4/2001 c1 Sam Zimmerstein
I love the way this begins - the reference to Alice in Wonderland does everything for the poem. I hope you don't mind if i'm critical here but I don't think the poem needs the "stranger." Could you write a poem using maybe just the first five or six lines of this one and use the theme of complete and utter bizzareness? Maybe you could include a few mad hatters or white rabbits too!
I love the way this begins - the reference to Alice in Wonderland does everything for the poem. I hope you don't mind if i'm critical here but I don't think the poem needs the "stranger." Could you write a poem using maybe just the first five or six lines of this one and use the theme of complete and utter bizzareness? Maybe you could include a few mad hatters or white rabbits too!
1/26/2001 c1 traeumenHerz
Value is in the eye of the beholder. Though this is...what to say...I have no idea how to express what I feel about this poem. I can try, though...Each person is an enigma. Inside ourselves we may be different people, and we can do stuff that is so suprising to our later selves. I know, in a way, how this poem feels in a person. You've written it wonderfully.
Value is in the eye of the beholder. Though this is...what to say...I have no idea how to express what I feel about this poem. I can try, though...Each person is an enigma. Inside ourselves we may be different people, and we can do stuff that is so suprising to our later selves. I know, in a way, how this poem feels in a person. You've written it wonderfully.
1/9/2001 c1 LunarBard
That is such a good poem. I love how you use so many discriptive words
That is such a good poem. I love how you use so many discriptive words