for I Am The Dead Bird11/26/2004 c1 
20Qu33n of Spades
Wow. That was amzing.
I am always stunned by your powers of description...
20Qu33n of SpadesWow. That was amzing.
I am always stunned by your powers of description...
9/2/2004 c1 69tomato-greens
I think I already told you this in that email, but now that the review button loves me I might as well tell you again that you are undeniably brilliant.
The way she's so fixated on morbid beauty is fascinating-she seemed so "normal", and yet the viewing of one small dead creature totally changed her outlook on life. And not in a bad way, not in a good way-she got her wish to be crushed and beautiful, hmm? The symbolism is so blatant in such an understated way that I'm seriously in love with it. Well, lust, maybe.
Gorgeous altogether. The jagged feel of the writing fits it perfectly, and the detailed description seems to fit in with the whole fixation thing. Like Firestarter! But too much Stephen King for me...um...yeah. It's creepy. In a really, really, good way.
69tomato-greensI think I already told you this in that email, but now that the review button loves me I might as well tell you again that you are undeniably brilliant.
The way she's so fixated on morbid beauty is fascinating-she seemed so "normal", and yet the viewing of one small dead creature totally changed her outlook on life. And not in a bad way, not in a good way-she got her wish to be crushed and beautiful, hmm? The symbolism is so blatant in such an understated way that I'm seriously in love with it. Well, lust, maybe.
Gorgeous altogether. The jagged feel of the writing fits it perfectly, and the detailed description seems to fit in with the whole fixation thing. Like Firestarter! But too much Stephen King for me...um...yeah. It's creepy. In a really, really, good way.
8/30/2004 c1 32Stormy Daye
That was short but really good. Somehow the line that stands out the most is at the end of the first paragraph: "She did not touch it." It seems pretty obvious that you wouldn't touch a dead bird but it just goes for some reason.
32Stormy DayeThat was short but really good. Somehow the line that stands out the most is at the end of the first paragraph: "She did not touch it." It seems pretty obvious that you wouldn't touch a dead bird but it just goes for some reason.
8/30/2004 c1 1A Chroi
*blinks rapidly* Talk about hypnotic. Wow. (Get used to hearing that, because you will quite often.) I loved the part about the blackout in the classroom, though it gave me a bit of the chills. The ending...it's unsettling, but done in such a way that it's all right, if that makes sense. Kudos to you.
1A Chroi*blinks rapidly* Talk about hypnotic. Wow. (Get used to hearing that, because you will quite often.) I loved the part about the blackout in the classroom, though it gave me a bit of the chills. The ending...it's unsettling, but done in such a way that it's all right, if that makes sense. Kudos to you.