for Reality is Dead1/9/2007 c5 
5Disenchanted Tragedy
Truth hurts. Honesty is brutal.
And all this is true.
We live in a fucked up world run by the small percentage of rich pompous asses that seem to make it their business how the country should be run. What if we all decided to leave this hell-hole? All we'd leave behind, to be quite honest, is a ton of pollution, waste and useless material possessions. Now, what you say is true, and I hate to say this, but if I say this, if anyone else says it, we'd all be fucking hypocrites.
We're well off, sitting in front of our computers and laptops, listening to music, watching TV in front of a fan, air conditioner, radiator, only remotely worried about the world but doing nothing about anything.
However, I must tell you that your writing style is amazing and you made me laugh at times while pointing out things that, though definitely not new, are crucial in the utter destruction of our world. I shall tell you that you make good, forceful points with the right measure of sarcasm that made me continue reading instead of saying, "Oh, this is just the same old shit as always." Congrats for pointing out the state of the world.
But no, really, congrats for all of this.
5Disenchanted TragedyTruth hurts. Honesty is brutal.
And all this is true.
We live in a fucked up world run by the small percentage of rich pompous asses that seem to make it their business how the country should be run. What if we all decided to leave this hell-hole? All we'd leave behind, to be quite honest, is a ton of pollution, waste and useless material possessions. Now, what you say is true, and I hate to say this, but if I say this, if anyone else says it, we'd all be fucking hypocrites.
We're well off, sitting in front of our computers and laptops, listening to music, watching TV in front of a fan, air conditioner, radiator, only remotely worried about the world but doing nothing about anything.
However, I must tell you that your writing style is amazing and you made me laugh at times while pointing out things that, though definitely not new, are crucial in the utter destruction of our world. I shall tell you that you make good, forceful points with the right measure of sarcasm that made me continue reading instead of saying, "Oh, this is just the same old shit as always." Congrats for pointing out the state of the world.
But no, really, congrats for all of this.
2/14/2005 c5 2yellowchucks
Actually, I've always thought that the Olsen twins were trying to take over the world, not Hilary Duff. I despise all three.And I prefer the wooden barrel to the burlap sack. Now, I know the barrel isn't 'in', but it's more roomy, less scratchy. Although the splinters are terrible.
2yellowchucksActually, I've always thought that the Olsen twins were trying to take over the world, not Hilary Duff. I despise all three.And I prefer the wooden barrel to the burlap sack. Now, I know the barrel isn't 'in', but it's more roomy, less scratchy. Although the splinters are terrible.
2/14/2005 c3 yellowchucks
I say.Back with the diapers! Can't wait until I'm old and decrepit in a retiring home. Just lay in bed, poop in a pan, eat through a tube. Ah, the life.
I say.Back with the diapers! Can't wait until I'm old and decrepit in a retiring home. Just lay in bed, poop in a pan, eat through a tube. Ah, the life.
2/14/2005 c2 yellowchucks
Hybrid cars don't run off solar power, they're a mix between gas and electric- hence the term 'hybrid'.Eh, this is kinda... depressing. I'm one of those people who like to look on the bright side of things. I'm the one who will outrun the tornado. I live in the small town just far enough from the big city. I think my future is going to turn out alright. I'm feel safe in a big sweatshirt. My life is boring, but I make it fun. Yeah, we all get down a lot, but it makes for happier living when the glass is half full.
Hybrid cars don't run off solar power, they're a mix between gas and electric- hence the term 'hybrid'.Eh, this is kinda... depressing. I'm one of those people who like to look on the bright side of things. I'm the one who will outrun the tornado. I live in the small town just far enough from the big city. I think my future is going to turn out alright. I'm feel safe in a big sweatshirt. My life is boring, but I make it fun. Yeah, we all get down a lot, but it makes for happier living when the glass is half full.
12/27/2004 c5 Ethereal Oceans
Omg. I have never read anything more true in my life. I love this. I read all five chapter straight throught without even stopping long enough to breath (thank god we dont have to think to do that). I swear though, I have been setting here for the past twenty minutes lapping up these words as a starved dog would lap up milk. I agree with you on every single thing. Plus, I love how you were able to make a lot of it sarcastic. You had me laughing my ass off through most of it. Great job! I hope you write more.
Omg. I have never read anything more true in my life. I love this. I read all five chapter straight throught without even stopping long enough to breath (thank god we dont have to think to do that). I swear though, I have been setting here for the past twenty minutes lapping up these words as a starved dog would lap up milk. I agree with you on every single thing. Plus, I love how you were able to make a lot of it sarcastic. You had me laughing my ass off through most of it. Great job! I hope you write more.
12/21/2004 c5 2RetrogradeHeadspin
Not exactly the newest topics to bring up, but I liked the way you voiced this nonetheless. Reality is fucked up, but there are some people who're truly trying to be themselves but are still classified as "sheep" but the people who go on about how fucked up reality is. Either way, I enjoyed reading this.
2RetrogradeHeadspinNot exactly the newest topics to bring up, but I liked the way you voiced this nonetheless. Reality is fucked up, but there are some people who're truly trying to be themselves but are still classified as "sheep" but the people who go on about how fucked up reality is. Either way, I enjoyed reading this.
11/24/2004 c5 23wishingdreamingwaiting
you had me laughing my fucking ass off! and holy shit you coudn't be more right... this world is, and always has been, slowly deteriorating.
23wishingdreamingwaitingyou had me laughing my fucking ass off! and holy shit you coudn't be more right... this world is, and always has been, slowly deteriorating.
8/31/2004 c1 Yemaya
Hm. Well it's well written I can't argue with that. But while we're on the topic of how f*ed up reality is, no offence but I really really doubt you're a 14 year old prostitute. It's human nature to complain, it's human nature to take things for granted. There may be more over-fed people then under-fed people in the world but that doesn't change a few facts.
Life in Europe or the USA even at the bottom of the system is better then life in say...Sudan right now. If you get out your history book, you'll see that what your complaining about isn't new. The reason half these countries are still so poor is because they were colonies. You know Tasmania has no native aboriginies anymore? The settles hunted them with dogs and rifles for fun. At least they don't do that to homeless guys on the street.
Hm. Well it's well written I can't argue with that. But while we're on the topic of how f*ed up reality is, no offence but I really really doubt you're a 14 year old prostitute. It's human nature to complain, it's human nature to take things for granted. There may be more over-fed people then under-fed people in the world but that doesn't change a few facts.
Life in Europe or the USA even at the bottom of the system is better then life in say...Sudan right now. If you get out your history book, you'll see that what your complaining about isn't new. The reason half these countries are still so poor is because they were colonies. You know Tasmania has no native aboriginies anymore? The settles hunted them with dogs and rifles for fun. At least they don't do that to homeless guys on the street.
8/31/2004 c1 1Shinigami287
Very well written, and an excellent peice of work.
Keep it up.
Regards
-Shinigami
(P.S.-Reality isn't dead, it just sucks a whole lot.)
1Shinigami287Very well written, and an excellent peice of work.
Keep it up.
Regards
-Shinigami
(P.S.-Reality isn't dead, it just sucks a whole lot.)
8/30/2004 c3 49SleepDontWeep
the last line is just amazing! and now im left thinking about it, o doy!
u dont get alot of doy these days...sorry im an enormous friends fan. anyways i love ur sincerity in this! ur really amazing! i hope one day i can write like this!
if u wudnt mind checkin out my story: thats not how it happened. and tellin me wot u think! it wud mean alot! hee hee 'bring it on'... guilty pleasures... so u got d hots 4 kirsten dunst wot d hey, its true im agirl and i cant help admiting dat she is one fine piece of ass! anways hope to hear from u soon! love ya lots!
49SleepDontWeepthe last line is just amazing! and now im left thinking about it, o doy!
u dont get alot of doy these days...sorry im an enormous friends fan. anyways i love ur sincerity in this! ur really amazing! i hope one day i can write like this!
if u wudnt mind checkin out my story: thats not how it happened. and tellin me wot u think! it wud mean alot! hee hee 'bring it on'... guilty pleasures... so u got d hots 4 kirsten dunst wot d hey, its true im agirl and i cant help admiting dat she is one fine piece of ass! anways hope to hear from u soon! love ya lots!
8/27/2004 c1 zvz
Nice one.
I agree whole heartedly. This is a beautiful piece of litterary work.
Keep it up.
Nice one.
I agree whole heartedly. This is a beautiful piece of litterary work.
Keep it up.
8/27/2004 c1 14Black-raindb0w
aw thats so sad. i was almost crying lol. i love this... its very clever and well written. good job :)
ps. i love fight club also. brad pitt is my GOD too. hehe
14Black-raindb0waw thats so sad. i was almost crying lol. i love this... its very clever and well written. good job :)
ps. i love fight club also. brad pitt is my GOD too. hehe