8/28/2004 c1 82Linnet
Wow...this was great! I love this point of view, it's very enlightening. Was it meant to be in stanzas? It's fine without-I was just wondering because it took me *forever* to figure out how to do stanzas-but before you upload the document, put two spaces between stanzas. Again, lovely poem. Keep writing!
-Linnet
Wow...this was great! I love this point of view, it's very enlightening. Was it meant to be in stanzas? It's fine without-I was just wondering because it took me *forever* to figure out how to do stanzas-but before you upload the document, put two spaces between stanzas. Again, lovely poem. Keep writing!
-Linnet
8/27/2004 c1 Rara Punk
Wow, that is beautiful. I love the age in it and your rhyme. It could be one of the old nursery poems, used to scare small children into good behavior 200 years ago. Then again it is song of a forest...nice
Wow, that is beautiful. I love the age in it and your rhyme. It could be one of the old nursery poems, used to scare small children into good behavior 200 years ago. Then again it is song of a forest...nice