for The Living Daylight9/7/2004 c8 Fire Walk with Me
A great horde of zombies, a small group of humans, and a human on the roof with a broken ankle.
Damn, this is one sticky situation.
Keep writing.
P.S.: Damndest thing: My name is Eric.
A great horde of zombies, a small group of humans, and a human on the roof with a broken ankle.
Damn, this is one sticky situation.
Keep writing.
P.S.: Damndest thing: My name is Eric.
9/2/2004 c4 
3Spooky-Girl
"I'm Layla." The girl said. "And boy am I happy to see you."
"What do you mean you don't remember your name?" Layla asked.
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Should there be something between those? Seems like you forgot a line or something... ANYway, this chapter's really good. I like how you took the time to develop the plot, but it's nice getting into some more action and the dialogue is coo. ;)
3Spooky-Girl"I'm Layla." The girl said. "And boy am I happy to see you."
"What do you mean you don't remember your name?" Layla asked.
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Should there be something between those? Seems like you forgot a line or something... ANYway, this chapter's really good. I like how you took the time to develop the plot, but it's nice getting into some more action and the dialogue is coo. ;)
8/30/2004 c2 Fire Walk with Me
You know something? Out of all of the ghoul and zombie stories I've read here, I think I like this one the most, although it has only spanned two chapters. I'll be keeping my eye on this one.
Keep writing.
You know something? Out of all of the ghoul and zombie stories I've read here, I think I like this one the most, although it has only spanned two chapters. I'll be keeping my eye on this one.
Keep writing.
8/28/2004 c1 4swaggering curses
Not bad, nice idea, etc; I like the hole in the floor. For some odd reason. But do you realize that almost every sentence starts with "he"? =/
4swaggering cursesNot bad, nice idea, etc; I like the hole in the floor. For some odd reason. But do you realize that almost every sentence starts with "he"? =/
8/28/2004 c1 3Spooky-Girl
Ouh! Mysterious strangah! More, more, write more! I wanna know what happens!
3Spooky-GirlOuh! Mysterious strangah! More, more, write more! I wanna know what happens!