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9/17/2004 c1 120tabiboi
I love this- you are so talented! Keep writing, and if you get a chance, please R&R me.
Thanks, Tabi
9/2/2004 c1 13Artificial Refuge
I like this! Short, but very good. Yay for you!
9/1/2004 c1 41Stefen
Once again, really good, but quite strange. You know you ahve your name and shit at the bottom right?
8/31/2004 c1 33Kur'denras
This isn't exactly a poem. I know a poem doesn't need to have rhyme, but this has no rhythm, is organized into paragraphs, and is written in the style of a very short story. It's good and all, but not exactly a poem.
8/31/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
ah this is wonderful. the last line is so final i love it! and i think you're pen-name's real nice!
review me if you're free!
=summerdazed=

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