for Black Feathers on Ebony Skies
9/1/2004 c2 
4Ari-fm-ykVERY GOOD ONCE MORE! I really like the effect you have put on your Third Person so it is limited. Leave me hanging why don't you? One thing... you should describe a bit more. Decriptions make all the difference. And it is a good difference.
8/31/2004 c1 Ari-fm-ykAn excellent piece of work you have in the works. I can't wait to read more.
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