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9/4/2004 c1 10Quid
I like the message that it says. It's very calming.
9/3/2004 c1 kdatlyno
I like the message given out in this short piece. A suggestion: have you considered expanding it? Either into a slightly longer description, or I think you could make a very good poem out of this idea.
Just a thought :) the message itself is perfect, I just think that even more could be done with it.
8/31/2004 c1 10Jonathan Garrett
I like the message, it's definitely a positive one and I think it's one that people should remember. No matter what happens you're still you.
8/31/2004 c1 5tarzansgirl
your right, you are still you.
bravo chicka.
8/31/2004 c1 18chicastar5
very good,whatt i liked bout it: the person in the poem is saying like,even though this is what sometimes happens to me,oh well,its still me
lol
good work
Kari~

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