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9/4/2004 c1 10Quid
Shows a vivid reality of fear and friendship. Though you might want to separate it a bit as has been suggested.
9/3/2004 c1 6purplemuffin
wow... thats really startling, i'm so glad the friend came back to life, or woke up or w/e happened... good story
thanx for reviewing :)
9/2/2004 c1 Misguided Fool
I really like it. It's very emotional and has alot of imagery.
8/31/2004 c1 cindykelly
Excellent first person present tense narrative. I really like it, however I think you would do yourself a great service by dividing it into 3 or 4 paragraphs.
I also would like to see you expand it a little bit.

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