for Reckless7/16/2010 c1 
6Masquerade hide your face
wow that was awesome. I'm so glad they had a happy ending! You should make this into a longer story. Like during the engaement and marrige and stuff like that.
6Masquerade hide your facewow that was awesome. I'm so glad they had a happy ending! You should make this into a longer story. Like during the engaement and marrige and stuff like that.
7/14/2010 c1 Deadly Disaster
I loved this, the whole time i was thinking she better have to marry arman, hes so perfect tall dark and handsom
I loved this, the whole time i was thinking she better have to marry arman, hes so perfect tall dark and handsom
7/8/2010 c1 barbie princess
I liked when she ran down the block, after she took off her shoes and gave him the middle finger.
I liked when she ran down the block, after she took off her shoes and gave him the middle finger.
6/22/2010 c1 Bubbly Girl
Amazing. To tell you the truth, that one word pretty much sums up the whole story! :) There was one thing though: I had been hoping that you could do like an epilogue of sorts like: "1 year later..." or that you could of said that she was pregnant. (I have an obsession with the main character getting pregnant to the person that she loves before their wedding/engagement/what-have-you. Do you know what I am saying?) Anyways, other than those two details I love this story to death! :)
☮♥ ☺
~Bubbly Girl
Amazing. To tell you the truth, that one word pretty much sums up the whole story! :) There was one thing though: I had been hoping that you could do like an epilogue of sorts like: "1 year later..." or that you could of said that she was pregnant. (I have an obsession with the main character getting pregnant to the person that she loves before their wedding/engagement/what-have-you. Do you know what I am saying?) Anyways, other than those two details I love this story to death! :)
☮♥ ☺
~Bubbly Girl
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5/9/2010 c1 shhsilence
A lovely little story.
A lovely little story.
5/7/2010 c1 mdassley
Aww! This was super cute! I must admit I kind of had a feeling he was going to end up being behind the arranged marriage. But I loved the characters and the Canadian setting! Kudos!
Aww! This was super cute! I must admit I kind of had a feeling he was going to end up being behind the arranged marriage. But I loved the characters and the Canadian setting! Kudos!
5/1/2010 c1 nicolee
that was pretty good the start kinda took too long for me but i still enjoyed it
oh and your probably not aware of this but querido and querida mean exactly the same thing only querido is for guys and querida is for girls
that was pretty good the start kinda took too long for me but i still enjoyed it
oh and your probably not aware of this but querido and querida mean exactly the same thing only querido is for guys and querida is for girls
4/16/2010 c1 1Kiss The Stars With Me
Wow! That was such a great one-shot! I love how it turned out! Great job :)
1Kiss The Stars With MeWow! That was such a great one-shot! I love how it turned out! Great job :)
3/16/2010 c1 RipplingEbbulience
Interesting read...very spirited writing!1
I could connect well with this story being an Indian myself.
Well done, Keep writing...
-Rippling Ebullience
Interesting read...very spirited writing!1
I could connect well with this story being an Indian myself.
Well done, Keep writing...
-Rippling Ebullience
2/12/2010 c1 2pendragone96
you should make this longer, like the six months span...i thought novia meant girlfriend? this was really good...i was sad wen i finished it
2pendragone96you should make this longer, like the six months span...i thought novia meant girlfriend? this was really good...i was sad wen i finished it
1/29/2010 c1 5AmandaHold
Wow, I absolutely loved it. I liked how he had an answer for everything in the end. Sonya is a very intersting character.
5AmandaHoldWow, I absolutely loved it. I liked how he had an answer for everything in the end. Sonya is a very intersting character.