for Reckless1/10/2010 c1 ChocoResha
Oh my. Awesome! Very very nicely written. Very unsuspected plot. Well, until I realised that her soon-to-be husband was supposed to be rich too. Still! Great work!
Oh my. Awesome! Very very nicely written. Very unsuspected plot. Well, until I realised that her soon-to-be husband was supposed to be rich too. Still! Great work!
1/2/2010 c1 
1cerulean-azure
LOLZ! I appreciate it :) twenty pages must have taken ages to type and it was good! Hmm. I prefer chocolate in my drinks though I think you must have eaten it. well, good job :D
1cerulean-azureLOLZ! I appreciate it :) twenty pages must have taken ages to type and it was good! Hmm. I prefer chocolate in my drinks though I think you must have eaten it. well, good job :D
1/2/2010 c1 M.S.S92
I loved your story but you should have written it so it was longer... u should write something similar again, but longer!
I loved your story but you should have written it so it was longer... u should write something similar again, but longer!
11/19/2009 c1 4Shannyn
I read this last night and I so enjoyed it and wanted to thank you for that. :] Even predicting what was going to happen didn't lessen the absolute sweetness of it all haha. Keep it up! :)
4ShannynI read this last night and I so enjoyed it and wanted to thank you for that. :] Even predicting what was going to happen didn't lessen the absolute sweetness of it all haha. Keep it up! :)
8/22/2009 c1 P
Love love love this story! Can't wait to check out what else you have written! :-)
Love love love this story! Can't wait to check out what else you have written! :-)
8/7/2009 c1 4Arlia Stacy
LOVED IT! You didn't overload the scene with similes and metaphors. Very cute and sweet, and a really good cliche piece. :D
4Arlia StacyLOVED IT! You didn't overload the scene with similes and metaphors. Very cute and sweet, and a really good cliche piece. :D
8/4/2009 c1 Don't Eat Me
good short story
i enjoyed it alot this is my second time reading and i still like it
good short story
i enjoyed it alot this is my second time reading and i still like it
7/30/2009 c1 Asa
Pure genius.
Awesomely done!
Pure genius.
Awesomely done!
7/17/2009 c1 Bianca
very sexual. woot
very sexual. woot